Winter Preparations
Magic is always there to share. Share yours with a child...38 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely rhyming poem for children of all ages! The rhyme and rhythm flows naturally and smoothly. The imagery of harvesting in the fall comes loud and clear. And creates anticipation for what is next. Perfect entry. Love the artwork as well.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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This is a lovely rhyming poem for children of all ages! The rhyme and rhythm flows naturally and smoothly. The imagery of harvesting in the fall comes loud and clear. And creates anticipation for what is next. Perfect entry. Love the artwork as well.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Your review is the kind that I wrote this one for: that folks enjoyed and found a sunshiny escape from reality here!! I'm so very glad that you took me up on my little invitation to magical adventures, June - those stars and your wonderful comments are so very appreciated - THANK YOU!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Writer,
You've opened the lid of that magical box for young and old alike.
Love that cornfield with the eavesdroping ears,
the bright moonbeams and gryphon eggs.
The only thing you need is six stars to guide the way.
Perfect art work to match.
Well done.
You have a style that stands out.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Hello Writer,
You've opened the lid of that magical box for young and old alike.
Love that cornfield with the eavesdroping ears,
the bright moonbeams and gryphon eggs.
The only thing you need is six stars to guide the way.
Perfect art work to match.
Well done.
You have a style that stands out.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Your review is the kind that I wrote this one for: that folks enjoyed and found a sunshiny escape from reality here!! I'm so very glad that you took me up on my little invitation to magical adventures, Robert - those stars and your wonderful comments are so very appreciated - THANK YOU!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
Comment from karenina
Children are the cure for all that ails us! They find joy in the tiniest things, their awe and wonder at something as tiny as a snowflake cannot help but bring a bit of innocence to our own hearts! This is absolutely beautiful...beautifully rhymed and metered. A reminder of what lives within each of us! Good luck in the contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Children are the cure for all that ails us! They find joy in the tiniest things, their awe and wonder at something as tiny as a snowflake cannot help but bring a bit of innocence to our own hearts! This is absolutely beautiful...beautifully rhymed and metered. A reminder of what lives within each of us! Good luck in the contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, karenina, for such a wonderfully encouraging review. Have a magical weekend!
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Magical may be too much to hope for...then again, if I were still a child, I'd have high hopes!--Karenina
Comment from Patty Palmer
A fun story about the magical change between summer and fun stuff you do in the fall. Then off to look forward to the fun that winter brings.
Nice kid's poem. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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A fun story about the magical change between summer and fun stuff you do in the fall. Then off to look forward to the fun that winter brings.
Nice kid's poem. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, Patty, for your encouraging review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a fun autumn read with the reference to leaves, pumpkin patch, gryphons, and magical ears of corn. I suspect an analogy between grown up ears and human grown up ears, and littler ears being able to imagine all the possibilities of moonbeams and seasonal delights.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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This is a fun autumn read with the reference to leaves, pumpkin patch, gryphons, and magical ears of corn. I suspect an analogy between grown up ears and human grown up ears, and littler ears being able to imagine all the possibilities of moonbeams and seasonal delights.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I'm so very glad that you took me up on my little invitation to magical adventures, Crystie - those stars and your wonderful comments are so very appreciated - THANK YOU!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
Comment from Bill Schott
This children's rhyming poem, Winter Preparations, presented in six, tetrameter, AABBCC-rhymed sestets, brings the magic of imagination into full force as nature's bounty becomes fun fantasy.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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This children's rhyming poem, Winter Preparations, presented in six, tetrameter, AABBCC-rhymed sestets, brings the magic of imagination into full force as nature's bounty becomes fun fantasy.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much, Bill, for this encouraging review.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is lovely and full of fantasy magic. A wonderful verse that brings the whimsy out in all of us. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and feeling the pixie dust blow my way. Well done!
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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This is lovely and full of fantasy magic. A wonderful verse that brings the whimsy out in all of us. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and feeling the pixie dust blow my way. Well done!
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Your review is the kind that I wrote this one for: that folks enjoyed and found a sunshiny escape from reality here!! I'm so very glad that you took me up on my little invitation to magical adventures, Melissa - Thank You!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a fun poem about getting ready for winter. It shows all things you can do from Halloween on. If you live near any mountains your pet gryphon can live their and easily fly to your yard. Or you can all go live in caves in the hills. I like the puns with ears of corn.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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This is a fun poem about getting ready for winter. It shows all things you can do from Halloween on. If you live near any mountains your pet gryphon can live their and easily fly to your yard. Or you can all go live in caves in the hills. I like the puns with ears of corn.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I'm so very glad that you enjoyed my little invitation to magical adventures, dragonpoet -- perhaps there is magic in the caves, yeah? ;) ;) Thank You for the wonderful review this morning - here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
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You're welcome. Same you you, Yvette.
Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. I think the poem is adequate for children in syntax and imagery. Nice rhyme. Wonderful imagination. My favorite thas far in the contest.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt contest. I think the poem is adequate for children in syntax and imagery. Nice rhyme. Wonderful imagination. My favorite thas far in the contest.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I'm so very glad that you enjoyed my little invitation to magical adventures, Gypsy - Thank You for the wonderful review!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. A solid story about magic and mythical beast that any child will love. Technically sound with a good rhyme scheme, and a solid ending. Great supporting art work of the old time bard. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Very good. A solid story about magic and mythical beast that any child will love. Technically sound with a good rhyme scheme, and a solid ending. Great supporting art work of the old time bard. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I'm so very glad that you enjoyed my little invitation to magical adventures, Taurus - Thank You for the wonderful review!! Here's sending you a few extra smiles for the weekend!