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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nicely done. I thought your chapter was well written. Great use of dialogue to show the personalities of each character. And the story pacing is solid. Well written and an enjoyable read!
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Very nicely done. I thought your chapter was well written. Great use of dialogue to show the personalities of each character. And the story pacing is solid. Well written and an enjoyable read!
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Michael, Thank you for the very pleasant review. I don't know if you've read any of my other chapters. If you want to, no need to review them. Just enjoy. The 1st 13 chapters are about Liz & Linda rescuing some girls from a Trafficking operation. It is very suspenseful.