Early Spring
New beginnings15 total reviews
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Paints a beautiful image with words. Great use of 11 syllables. The art work supports the work and is beautiful by its self. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
Very good. Paints a beautiful image with words. Great use of 11 syllables. The art work supports the work and is beautiful by its self. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I love cherry blossoms. They are always so beautiful. Nature really is amazing. God knew what He was doing. They know when to sleep and when to wake up and thrill us. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
I love cherry blossoms. They are always so beautiful. Nature really is amazing. God knew what He was doing. They know when to sleep and when to wake up and thrill us. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Our cherry trees went to sleep mid-summer - they should be well-rested by Spring! ;) Thanx for sharing your take on this limited format and best of luck at the polls today! ;)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
Our cherry trees went to sleep mid-summer - they should be well-rested by Spring! ;) Thanx for sharing your take on this limited format and best of luck at the polls today! ;)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed this particularly now as we are heading towards winter and the thought of spring and the beauty of the cherry blossom trees means better days ahead.
Thank you for the image and thought.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
I enjoyed this particularly now as we are heading towards winter and the thought of spring and the beauty of the cherry blossom trees means better days ahead.
Thank you for the image and thought.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
In just eleven syllables, you've created a clear and vivid picture of a beautiful occurrence in nature. Your choice of words makes it easy to imagine the transition from winter to spring. The artwork you've chosen pairs perfectly with your description. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
In just eleven syllables, you've created a clear and vivid picture of a beautiful occurrence in nature. Your choice of words makes it easy to imagine the transition from winter to spring. The artwork you've chosen pairs perfectly with your description. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review.