A Lovely Time
Cold arrives early in upstate New York!16 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I like your haiku very much.
"Cozy chilly" is interesting...I would think these concepts nearly opposites but it works for me. I especially like the last line and the accompanying artwork.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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I like your haiku very much.
"Cozy chilly" is interesting...I would think these concepts nearly opposites but it works for me. I especially like the last line and the accompanying artwork.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you. I love a cold room, windows open even, curling up with a big quilt, and reading. I love coziness, and while I love summer, it is not cozy!
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Your syllable count per line is correct, the image choice is perfect, and your words create great imagery. I could see everything relating to the arrival of the cold.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Your syllable count per line is correct, the image choice is perfect, and your words create great imagery. I could see everything relating to the arrival of the cold.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much. I wrote it in my head last night when I couldn?t sleep!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 for November when the Northern hemisphere preparing for the winter while the ground us covered in colorful leaves and the ducks get ready to fly south.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 for November when the Northern hemisphere preparing for the winter while the ground us covered in colorful leaves and the ducks get ready to fly south.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the nice review!
Comment from RodG
The Speaker here obviously likes this time of year if chilly air can be called "cozy." The scene of colored leaves on the ground and geese departing is easily visualized. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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The Speaker here obviously likes this time of year if chilly air can be called "cozy." The scene of colored leaves on the ground and geese departing is easily visualized. Rod
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the nice review!
Comment from L. Kalere
You poem left me cold...in a very good way! Nice imagery, and the last line pulls you right back to reality with the noisy geese. The artwork is perfect. Good Luck
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You poem left me cold...in a very good way! Nice imagery, and the last line pulls you right back to reality with the noisy geese. The artwork is perfect. Good Luck
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks for the great review!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 November poem. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I love this time of year too. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 November poem. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I love this time of year too. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much! I love autumn!
