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With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking

11 total reviews 
Comment from Mistydawn
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

After everything, they'd been through I think they'd be wise to keep moving. I'm sure being the do-gooders they are they won't, lol. Your story is well-written, very interesting. I had to laugh when your character said this would be a good place for it. I've had the same eerie thought before, lol. It's funny how pieces of movies stick with you scares you for years. You'd think I'd learn, but no, I'm first in line when a new horror movie comes out. Death by fright that's the way I'll go.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your involved review. You will enjoy the next chapter, for sure.