Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Note to Self?"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from AdaJulie
Nice work, details are riveting. It pulled me in and kept my attention.
That's not always easy to do. Thank you for sharing.
Good job showing the events not just telling.
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Nice work, details are riveting. It pulled me in and kept my attention.
That's not always easy to do. Thank you for sharing.
Good job showing the events not just telling.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
Comment from Heather Knight
This is very good advice. The writer must try to be truthful, to teach something and to write beautifully.
Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Very enjoyable.
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This is very good advice. The writer must try to be truthful, to teach something and to write beautifully.
Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
Comment from Rickie1
This is different, nice job. You listed some great advice. Wisdom really. This should be on poster hanging on the wall over every author. I do write to please myself first though. I do hope it touches others but I have to like what I do first.
Rickie
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This is different, nice job. You listed some great advice. Wisdom really. This should be on poster hanging on the wall over every author. I do write to please myself first though. I do hope it touches others but I have to like what I do first.
Rickie
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a note to yourself. How and when to write is up to each author. Write for your own satisfaction rather than to publish our works for others.
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A very well-written poem about a note to yourself. How and when to write is up to each author. Write for your own satisfaction rather than to publish our works for others.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed the message that you shared with us in this poem. Your couplets flowed from one thought to the next and shared your outlook and point of view. Well done and thanks for sharing this with us.
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I enjoyed the message that you shared with us in this poem. Your couplets flowed from one thought to the next and shared your outlook and point of view. Well done and thanks for sharing this with us.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
