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Fire Inside

A short poem

162 total reviews 
Comment from Bina1
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When you click to edit it, there is line there to add picture, you can select from FanArtReviw, I think they have a zillion to choose from. This is a great little poem, I love these, short, sweet and get me to the point! Good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
    Thank You very much for the review!!! I found a pic. & added it to the poem. I think it compliments it well.
reply by Bina1 on 01-Jun-2012
    I looked at it, perfection!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
    Thank you, once again!!!
Comment from Linda England Bonam
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This was a very effective 5-7-5 poem with perfect syllable count. Very nice. It would be nice if you could find a nice fire picture or embers in a fireplace, to add a little to this.

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
    Thank you very much for your thoughts. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and for your positive feedback. It was my first time writing this type of poem, so that means a lot to me. How do I add a pic. to a poem?
reply by Linda England Bonam on 01-Jun-2012
    Go to your poem and push the edit button. Then select fanart review right above your poem. Then type in a category (fire) and hit search and you will find several listings. Or if you want key words fireplace or key word embers. When you find the one you want push select and then save.