Oh Life!
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Comment from sellgirls
Ouch! "After everything I gave to you--including life--you turn on me because I have only done what I thought was best for you!" This is what I'm hearing the parent say in my mind. An emotionally charged write, done in that unique style that is only you!
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Ouch! "After everything I gave to you--including life--you turn on me because I have only done what I thought was best for you!" This is what I'm hearing the parent say in my mind. An emotionally charged write, done in that unique style that is only you!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2006
Comment from terryangelo
I have read your piece multiple times and still don't think I fully understand what you are trying to say. Parents gave life, time, sleepless nights, taught words, words hurt, child fears parents, parents are disowned or is child disowned?
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I have read your piece multiple times and still don't think I fully understand what you are trying to say. Parents gave life, time, sleepless nights, taught words, words hurt, child fears parents, parents are disowned or is child disowned?
Comment Written 30-Mar-2006
Comment from Jamarah
Hi Alcreator Writer. This was a reflective and sad rebuke. And I sensed an air of resignation in this well thought out poem.... almost a sigh of "Oh well!" The image was well drawn, and the expression high-impact. I enjoyed it very much.
JAM
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Hi Alcreator Writer. This was a reflective and sad rebuke. And I sensed an air of resignation in this well thought out poem.... almost a sigh of "Oh well!" The image was well drawn, and the expression high-impact. I enjoyed it very much.
JAM
Comment Written 30-Mar-2006
Comment from RaymondJohn
It took me a few readings to get what you were saying, but I did and it is an excellent job. The words create the images, sorta in mirror writing or something. I hope I don't start thinking that way. All the best. Ray.
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It took me a few readings to get what you were saying, but I did and it is an excellent job. The words create the images, sorta in mirror writing or something. I hope I don't start thinking that way. All the best. Ray.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2006
Comment from Brantley88
Well done. This piece speads well of a parents woes with their children. It holds hard and true to the form. I must remember not to talk back to my parents next time. Good job.
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Well done. This piece speads well of a parents woes with their children. It holds hard and true to the form. I must remember not to talk back to my parents next time. Good job.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2006
