Leander
poem204 total reviews
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
What a great, fun poem this is, Brooke!!! I think this is my all time favourite that you have written (and they were all great).
Love it! I can see that children and adults would both love this poem. Chock full of very fun imagery.
Very hard to pick what my fave part is, as it is all so good. I guess ... "he swiped the sour from pickles" ... very creative and unique, I gotta say.
Just a delightful read from beginning to end, with excellent flow and strong rhyming.
bichonfrisegirl aka connie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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What a great, fun poem this is, Brooke!!! I think this is my all time favourite that you have written (and they were all great).
Love it! I can see that children and adults would both love this poem. Chock full of very fun imagery.
Very hard to pick what my fave part is, as it is all so good. I guess ... "he swiped the sour from pickles" ... very creative and unique, I gotta say.
Just a delightful read from beginning to end, with excellent flow and strong rhyming.
bichonfrisegirl aka connie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Connie, thank you so very much :-) My daughter really likes this one a lot too :-) I so appreciate your thoughtful comments and most generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. I really did love it! I forgot to mention what a chuckle I got when I saw the look on Sawyer's face. He really did look like a "Leander" ... lol.
:) Too funny!
Connie
Comment from MAMONIA
This is absolutely the best I have ever read!
You caught that 'evil' look in Sawyer's eyes and
wrote the most magnificent story to boot!!
I loved every charming word and laughed a lot
while reading this.
Fabulous, my friend, does not give it enough
rewards for a great work.
Best of luck. I know you won already.
Marie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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This is absolutely the best I have ever read!
You caught that 'evil' look in Sawyer's eyes and
wrote the most magnificent story to boot!!
I loved every charming word and laughed a lot
while reading this.
Fabulous, my friend, does not give it enough
rewards for a great work.
Best of luck. I know you won already.
Marie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Marie, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I am thrilled you like this poem and thank you for your encouraging and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
Now hold on a contton-pickin' minute! So the boy is a little ... mischeesiest? Ain't no call to call him Lee!
Do not thrust greatness on the lad 'til he truly earns it!
Though I have to admit that raised eyebrow brough a tear of pride to my tired old eye.
Brooke, this is a terrific new expression.
I love swiped sour from the pickles.
Terrific.
But what do you expect from a guy who's forced two
kinds of stripes at a swanky dinner party?
And don't get me started on the prison suit with ears.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Now hold on a contton-pickin' minute! So the boy is a little ... mischeesiest? Ain't no call to call him Lee!
Do not thrust greatness on the lad 'til he truly earns it!
Though I have to admit that raised eyebrow brough a tear of pride to my tired old eye.
Brooke, this is a terrific new expression.
I love swiped sour from the pickles.
Terrific.
But what do you expect from a guy who's forced two
kinds of stripes at a swanky dinner party?
And don't get me started on the prison suit with ears.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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Thanks so very much, Lee. I truly appreciate your sixth star and your great comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Rondeno
I roared with laughter the instant I saw the photo. And the poem does this magnificent image full justice. I think they call this style "mock-heroic" (or am I confusing Leander with Lysander?)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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I roared with laughter the instant I saw the photo. And the poem does this magnificent image full justice. I think they call this style "mock-heroic" (or am I confusing Leander with Lysander?)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Michael, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from steevie
Sawyer has that maniacal expression on his face, that its enough for his mommy to drop what's she's doing and offer up a piece of chocolate cake to appease the spell that has been cast her way.
Either that, or he's just wondering was his mother doesn't put his Cheerios in a bowl like other mothers do.
Now Brooke, I want you to answer me honestly, did Sawyer get that facial expression from you?
well done, Brooke
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Sawyer has that maniacal expression on his face, that its enough for his mommy to drop what's she's doing and offer up a piece of chocolate cake to appease the spell that has been cast her way.
Either that, or he's just wondering was his mother doesn't put his Cheerios in a bowl like other mothers do.
Now Brooke, I want you to answer me honestly, did Sawyer get that facial expression from you?
well done, Brooke
smiles
steve
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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STeve, thank you so very much :-) Truth be told, Sawyer's Mommy had the best expressions ever. I used to laugh and laugh when she would make faces. Clearly he has inherited his expressiveness from her. :-) Brooke
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Thank you for a great reply, Brooke.
Its always nice to hear from you, friend
steve
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
The first lines of the poem correspond so well to the photograph and made me smile right away. Good rhyme used throughout the poem. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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The first lines of the poem correspond so well to the photograph and made me smile right away. Good rhyme used throughout the poem. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Sarah, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
Oh, I thought at the end, she was going to paddle him!
Sounds as if he could be a budding sociopath. Lots of unique "bad" things, the naughty boy does. Especially creative:
grabbed the hop away from frogs,
he swiped the sour from pickles,
pilfered spots from butterflies,
plucked the silver from the stars
Excellent entry.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Oh, I thought at the end, she was going to paddle him!
Sounds as if he could be a budding sociopath. Lots of unique "bad" things, the naughty boy does. Especially creative:
grabbed the hop away from frogs,
he swiped the sour from pickles,
pilfered spots from butterflies,
plucked the silver from the stars
Excellent entry.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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paddle my precious grandson? LOL Thank you so very much, Spitfire :-) Broke
Comment from Bill Schott
Another terrific poem with a fantasy theme and a fantastic photograph of 'Leander'. Just the best set of nutty thefts for a child to read. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Another terrific poem with a fantasy theme and a fantastic photograph of 'Leander'. Just the best set of nutty thefts for a child to read. Good stuff.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Bill, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
This boy is really bad--stealing honey from the bees and perfume from the flowers. Mom really got ticked when he stole the silver from the stars. Maybe the reason we have horses is because a kid like Leander stole the strips from a zebra.:}
Loved It! Excellent job.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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This boy is really bad--stealing honey from the bees and perfume from the flowers. Mom really got ticked when he stole the silver from the stars. Maybe the reason we have horses is because a kid like Leander stole the strips from a zebra.:}
Loved It! Excellent job.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Cajungirl, thank you so much :-p) Brooke
Comment from pipersfancy
Something of a pint-sized Grinch... this Leander! Completely opposite your little sweetness and light of a grandson! Outstanding photo accompanies this piece! What fun!
PF
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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Something of a pint-sized Grinch... this Leander! Completely opposite your little sweetness and light of a grandson! Outstanding photo accompanies this piece! What fun!
PF
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013
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PF, thank you so very much :_) Brooke
