Fire Inside
A short poem162 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You have penned a beautiful 5/7/5 it is very well written syllable count is correct and it is beautifully presented good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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You have penned a beautiful 5/7/5 it is very well written syllable count is correct and it is beautifully presented good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much, for your positive review.
Comment from deb552
These short forms can be quite tricky, at least as far as I'm concerned. I hadn't heard of most before joining the site, and have only attempted a few. I think you have done a good job here. It sounds as though you found love, and that's a great feeling.......at least from what I can remember! Your choice of artwork adds to the read! Hope all is going well, and you continue to share your thoughts. Best wishes, deb
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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These short forms can be quite tricky, at least as far as I'm concerned. I hadn't heard of most before joining the site, and have only attempted a few. I think you have done a good job here. It sounds as though you found love, and that's a great feeling.......at least from what I can remember! Your choice of artwork adds to the read! Hope all is going well, and you continue to share your thoughts. Best wishes, deb
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review. I am happy that you liked it. I had fun writing it. It was somewhat difficult, cut easy things never stirs creativity. And that's what it's all about...Keeping the candle in the mind burning. Winds of change may dance the flames, but the fire forever remains...
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see you've done it again, right here in your reply! my friend your a poet, in my minds eye. so keep on writing, just say what you feel, that's what i think makes poetry real!!!!! Really loved what you wrote here! deb
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That was awesome!!! Great minds really do think alike. Now my words are taking flight. If they ever land you may finally see. What it really means when I share these words from me...lol
Comment from thmedina
Good little five-seven-five Vincent. It's catchy. Sounds like a decent refrain or hook to a musical piece. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure. Tm
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Good little five-seven-five Vincent. It's catchy. Sounds like a decent refrain or hook to a musical piece. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure. Tm
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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You're welcome and thanks for the positive review. I might have to start writing jingles...lol
Comment from Mountain Mom
Great 5-7-5 poem! Stay with the writing. Showing the best in any piece does take quite a bit of effort, but oh, the rewards of a finished work that will speak to hearts.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Great 5-7-5 poem! Stay with the writing. Showing the best in any piece does take quite a bit of effort, but oh, the rewards of a finished work that will speak to hearts.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much. I am very passionate about writing and just hope that my words touch people. That's what it is all about.
Comment from Allison78
I think you did such a fantastic job on your first 5-7-5 poem! I just found this romantic and passionate. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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I think you did such a fantastic job on your first 5-7-5 poem! I just found this romantic and passionate. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much Allison. I am very happy that you enjoyed it.
Comment from lnoreika
Oh, love! I am sure love, or lust out numbers all other topics when it comes to poems. I love your picture, and your words ring true.
You must be in love, or love is in love with you.
Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Oh, love! I am sure love, or lust out numbers all other topics when it comes to poems. I love your picture, and your words ring true.
You must be in love, or love is in love with you.
Great job!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thanks for the great review. I'm no longer in love, but my eternal quest for love, never seizes.
Comment from Anisa-
Nicely done with this little write. Looks like your syllables are spot on. You paint a very good picture in a short amount of time.
Anisa
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Nicely done with this little write. Looks like your syllables are spot on. You paint a very good picture in a short amount of time.
Anisa
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much for this positive review.
Comment from Joy Graham
I enjoyed your first 5/7/5 poem. Your syllables worked just fine. This is a very romantic message that you are saying about someone special in your life I think. Best wishes in this contest :)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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I enjoyed your first 5/7/5 poem. Your syllables worked just fine. This is a very romantic message that you are saying about someone special in your life I think. Best wishes in this contest :)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you. I was really writing more about the ideal of love. It is a precious feeling that I miss incredibly.
Comment from Suzie Q
Congratulations! This is a very nice Haiku! Great photo to start it off and you expressed yourself well. It's hard to do that with limited words, but you managed just fine. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Congratulations! This is a very nice Haiku! Great photo to start it off and you expressed yourself well. It's hard to do that with limited words, but you managed just fine. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much. I'm happy that you liked it.
Comment from visionary1234
Well I found you Vincent! red and black it is! and if this is your first effort at 5-7-5 you're doing it awfully well! Love especially the last line - it says it all. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Well I found you Vincent! red and black it is! and if this is your first effort at 5-7-5 you're doing it awfully well! Love especially the last line - it says it all. Congratulations!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2012
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and yes, you found me...lol
