What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from Air Spirit
The picture caught my eye... all the words inside the head, showing a lot of brain activity is apropos for your poem... I agree that what 'we put out into the world' is who we are --- it is a reflection of our image... but bottom line is, that 'talk' is cheap -- and it is the 'actions' that to me matter the most... being a poet, I am drawn to and love words... but I have learned a hard lesson -- to NOT listen to what people say, but watch what they do... to me, actions speak much louder than words... but your words, and what you say, is certainly indicative and reveals allot about you ... but to me it is the 'actions' that speak the loudest and the best character reference...
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The picture caught my eye... all the words inside the head, showing a lot of brain activity is apropos for your poem... I agree that what 'we put out into the world' is who we are --- it is a reflection of our image... but bottom line is, that 'talk' is cheap -- and it is the 'actions' that to me matter the most... being a poet, I am drawn to and love words... but I have learned a hard lesson -- to NOT listen to what people say, but watch what they do... to me, actions speak much louder than words... but your words, and what you say, is certainly indicative and reveals allot about you ... but to me it is the 'actions' that speak the loudest and the best character reference...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, what you say in those few words is an obvious statement. We are what we express, well, most of the time. I hold on to a disclaimer here, just in case. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)
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Hi there, what you say in those few words is an obvious statement. We are what we express, well, most of the time. I hold on to a disclaimer here, just in case. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from royowen
"From the resources of the heart, the mouth speaks" it's true that the heart is an unfathomable myster, it can well control how think, feel, moving us to things it wants, rather than what's right. Well done, a great entry in this contest, good luck, Blrssings, Roy
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"From the resources of the heart, the mouth speaks" it's true that the heart is an unfathomable myster, it can well control how think, feel, moving us to things it wants, rather than what's right. Well done, a great entry in this contest, good luck, Blrssings, Roy
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2018