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Comment from RPFoster
Bravo! You did an excellent job capturing what we all feel as we get older and life opens up to it's true self, I too wish to be a kid again sometimes, safe in a cocoon. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Bravo! You did an excellent job capturing what we all feel as we get older and life opens up to it's true self, I too wish to be a kid again sometimes, safe in a cocoon. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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I really praise your generous review.a hearty thanks for the rating:-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Heart imagines life
beneath silver-sweet full moon
not out of cocoon << Interesting way to say "youth"
We all wish for it as we get older. Most folks, not all, have found memories of childhood.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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Heart imagines life
beneath silver-sweet full moon
not out of cocoon << Interesting way to say "youth"
We all wish for it as we get older. Most folks, not all, have found memories of childhood.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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thank you:)
Comment from SaluteDobby
Wow. Anupam, this was really fantastic. And the message is so profound. Coming from a young boy like you makes it even better. It truly deserves the "All time best" award. Congrats!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Wow. Anupam, this was really fantastic. And the message is so profound. Coming from a young boy like you makes it even better. It truly deserves the "All time best" award. Congrats!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I am happy that you liked it.your words are really encouraging.getting to see more indians here...hehe.thanks for an excellent review:-)
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I think I'm the same Indian you are talking about. Mine was the "Opposites attract" contest entry that you had reviewed. My name is Namratha. My husband and I stay in Bangalore.
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Ok.finally i know your name now...hehe.it is a pleasure interacting with other indians here.
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Yes, now that the contest is over, I can reveal my identity. I lost by one vote, by the way.. :( Anyways, its the appreciation that counts, not winning/the prize.
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site fulfills your goals for membership. I admired your "cocoon" metaphor and "moon" image along with the rhyme in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site fulfills your goals for membership. I admired your "cocoon" metaphor and "moon" image along with the rhyme in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your words and time:-)
Comment from lakeport
Cocoon life, indeed sadly life is not all roses. that's a very heartfelt expressed 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Lakeport,
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Cocoon life, indeed sadly life is not all roses. that's a very heartfelt expressed 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Lakeport,
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your kind review sir.it means a lot to me:-)
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your welcome. Lakeport.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
a clever use of words, Anupam,
which ring true.
you are right - we do live in a cocoon when children,
protected from the outside world by our parents and
siblings. It's a rude awakening when we go out there.
Margaret
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
a clever use of words, Anupam,
which ring true.
you are right - we do live in a cocoon when children,
protected from the outside world by our parents and
siblings. It's a rude awakening when we go out there.
Margaret
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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I really appreciate kind and positive review from a very talented and experienced person like you who has got so much work published.a hearty thanks:-)
Comment from CR Delport
Yeah, life very rarely turns out how we imagined as kids. When kids dream, once you grow up the world is just not the same. Sometimes progress is not a good thing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Yeah, life very rarely turns out how we imagined as kids. When kids dream, once you grow up the world is just not the same. Sometimes progress is not a good thing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thanks for reading and your views:-)
Comment from emjaihammond
This was well thought through as you write of what all men and women soon find out as they face life head on. Childhood should be filled with the security and peace that comes from the adult world being at peace without and within, but for us there is a good dose of reality when we reach adulthood. Still, God is in control, even though sometimes we turn from His comfort. Thanks for such a thoughtful read.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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This was well thought through as you write of what all men and women soon find out as they face life head on. Childhood should be filled with the security and peace that comes from the adult world being at peace without and within, but for us there is a good dose of reality when we reach adulthood. Still, God is in control, even though sometimes we turn from His comfort. Thanks for such a thoughtful read.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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glad to know your views.thanks for kind rating:)
Comment from SteveY
So true my friend. No wonder this one reached all time best status. Nicely done. I really like your example of the cocoon. But there is another layer of cocoon still to break free of...this reality that we perceive with our senses!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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So true my friend. No wonder this one reached all time best status. Nicely done. I really like your example of the cocoon. But there is another layer of cocoon still to break free of...this reality that we perceive with our senses!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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I am glad you liked it and yous words mean a lot for to me.thanks for the positive feedback
Comment from gaangel62
Great poem. I'm an adult and I wish I could live in a cocoon. The artwork is great. I am still learning about different types of poetry and this is simply and beautiful.
Angie
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Great poem. I'm an adult and I wish I could live in a cocoon. The artwork is great. I am still learning about different types of poetry and this is simply and beautiful.
Angie
Comment Written 24-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2013
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Thanks for a kind review and positive words:-)
