What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
This is a good poem in the sense that it keeps within the 15 words and 71 character requirement of the contest. You have also used the two compulsory word, 'scribe' and 'express' in the context of what you had to say. However, doesn't 'speak' and 'express' mean somewhat the same thing? Just a thought.
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This is a good poem in the sense that it keeps within the 15 words and 71 character requirement of the contest. You have also used the two compulsory word, 'scribe' and 'express' in the context of what you had to say. However, doesn't 'speak' and 'express' mean somewhat the same thing? Just a thought.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from fm wright
A most wonderful entry for this contest. You have said so well your message within the restrictive perimeters of this format which have all been perfectly met.
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A most wonderful entry for this contest. You have said so well your message within the restrictive perimeters of this format which have all been perfectly met.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from karenina
There is a power in these words...
A warning...
Beware the mask you wear, the lies you tell, the hypocrisy you slither in...
ONE knows for CERTAIN what your truth is...
You will never deceive Him.
Karenina
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There is a power in these words...
A warning...
Beware the mask you wear, the lies you tell, the hypocrisy you slither in...
ONE knows for CERTAIN what your truth is...
You will never deceive Him.
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a simple and succinct revelation about a profound truth - we are what we say, and we seldom account for our words - well written by this spiritually warm writer...
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In my opinion, a simple and succinct revelation about a profound truth - we are what we say, and we seldom account for our words - well written by this spiritually warm writer...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Nanny 6
You definitely wrapped it all up and tied it in a bow in just15 words about life, how we act, and what we say while we are here... And after that we will be getting Rewards for all we did. Good luck in the contest!
Judy
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You definitely wrapped it all up and tied it in a bow in just15 words about life, how we act, and what we say while we are here... And after that we will be getting Rewards for all we did. Good luck in the contest!
Judy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from His Grayness
Very uncommon indeed and yet very creative as intended I would expect to capture reader grip, which is well accomplished for sure. I read it several times and offer not suggestions to improve this work in any way! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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Very uncommon indeed and yet very creative as intended I would expect to capture reader grip, which is well accomplished for sure. I read it several times and offer not suggestions to improve this work in any way! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, A. L. D. And if we are what we write, I'm in BIG trouble--I'm all over sanity's map. No, you're right, we are what we scribe, unfortunately for me!
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Another fine write, A. L. D. And if we are what we write, I'm in BIG trouble--I'm all over sanity's map. No, you're right, we are what we scribe, unfortunately for me!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
Nice little message conveyed in just 15 words- very well done. And I completely agree, people see who we are through the things we express whether this be through speech, drama, art, writing, anything. We all make our mark on the world and ensure we cannot be forgotten. Good job
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Nice little message conveyed in just 15 words- very well done. And I completely agree, people see who we are through the things we express whether this be through speech, drama, art, writing, anything. We all make our mark on the world and ensure we cannot be forgotten. Good job
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from hari anand
Truly exceptional, the summary of life. Thoughts become things. This contest is unique. And requires a lot of creativity to fill in. Picture complements your words.
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Truly exceptional, the summary of life. Thoughts become things. This contest is unique. And requires a lot of creativity to fill in. Picture complements your words.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi it is true that you are what you write or say.
This short write is so full of meaning and philosophy. Say something before you go. Very strong assertion here and in it resides the pith of what is above.
Excellent.
Danny Jock
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Hi it is true that you are what you write or say.
This short write is so full of meaning and philosophy. Say something before you go. Very strong assertion here and in it resides the pith of what is above.
Excellent.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018