Comment from AliSmith

Excellent

It is a beautiful poem, succinct and poignant. The picture with it is also precious. You can feel both the heartache and the emotion behind these few words. What a precious, heart rending memory. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Ali

thank you so much for your kind comments. He was a special gift that I will treasure for an entire lifetime. Carol

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

So much said in
so few words. You've made
an indulable image in this
reader's mind, your words
ring home to this reader.
An awesome tribute to a
little warrior, bless you
for sharing with us. :)Lora

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Lora

I finally figured out how to download his picture and I wanted to use it so much that I searched for a contest...Surpriseingy the short love poem was exactly what I needed. Smiles, Carol

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A poem of poignancy, but tinged
with such warmth, such tenderness
that comes through in each tear
stained word of this beautiful
writing.
Well done

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fastdigits

Thank you for your kind and heartfelt words. Smiles, CArol

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

oh he was a splitting image of you! i can't really picture how you went through the tragic moments, thanks for sharing this and may God bless his soul and yours too. you will see him again in the next life.

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Arjuna

Without that thought I doubt I would make it through another day. Thank you very much for reading and understanding. Always a friend, CArol

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Begin Again,

Oh!! Michael is so very beautiful and full of joy! He looks like an angel! How sad my friend! Your little broken heart on your poem is just heart wrenching.

Each line is wonderfully written and precious!
"God's gift to me, Our love lives forever" ...forever!

That is the greatest love poem of all time! Thank you for sharing your 'love' with us.

SweetLinda

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Linda

From the day he was born everyone said he was just too cute to be a boy...I guess he was just an angel from heaven sent to touch our hearts for just a little while. Thank you. CArol

reply by AnnaLinda on 02-Nov-2009

My pleasure! It is just heartbreaking.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

What a lovely picture it is, too, Carol - what a lovely boy I can tell he was and remains in your heart and memory - I just finished reading LauraKatherine's novel and now your poems about Michael and I think I need a good hour or two to just cry now. Brooke :-)

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Brooke

Thank you ...I have been crying for two days...time to stop...my heart should be cleansed by now...but I think not. Thanks...Carol