Comment from JJ Rowe

Excellent

Nicely written Roy! The first stanza is very strong. The whole is rich with meaning with a wonderful flow. I enjoyed this! Good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thanks JJ for once again giving me an excellent rating and kind words, I'm grateful, Roy.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent idea in this. The darkness caused by ghosts of the past can be driven away when exposed to God's light. Your ABCB rhyme is great, as is the flow. All your words contribute to the thought and make it clear. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thank you so much Judi, for the kind review, lovely comments and excellent rating, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy

reply by judiverse on 02-Mar-2015

You're welcome. Enjoy the day. judi

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Most welcome

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

The only ghost I care to have in or near me is the Holy Ghost. Joy if that fellow. Saw this and thought to review it. Well done, Bro. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thanks Ben, great support again my bro, I appreciate you also, blessings,
Roy.

reply by Ben Colder on 02-Mar-2015

Check out Faitwriters.com. I spent time there among the Christian sector as well. May be something of interest. I think you could share your talent and be very encouraging. All born again bros and sisters, most young ones.

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thanks bro

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering, Roy.

Impeccable meter and unforced rhymes.

Top enjambment aids the flow further.

Very strong Faith statement from one who used to live in the dark before finding the light.

Nice 'f' alliteration in 4th line.

Determination never to go backwards from positivity and good.

Excellent entry.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thank you so much Ray, for the kind review, well wishes, lovely comments and excellent rating, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Roy this is brilliant...ghost of the past ...what a good use of the prompt
Darkness cannot pierce the day....I love that hopeful line...
It is Unpierceable because you walk with God
God bless


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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thank you so much Jenny, for the kind review, lovely comments and excellent rating, I appreciate them, blessings, Roy