Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute quatrain poem about the adventurous boy who found home was where he wanted to be. the picture is cute. he looks like he slapped his hand to his head and stalked away in fear lol

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

sweetwoodjax, thank you so very much :-) I just love his expression in that photo. Brooke

Comment from Craigitar

Excellent

Great kid story, Brooke! Young imaginations will eat this up, I'm sure. The rhyme and rhythm make the story more fun--kids will love it. Great job! Craig

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Craig, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Connie C

Excellent

What a wonderful story this is, Brooke, and what a great children's book this would be with the help of an illustrator to accompany your well-rhymed and fun lines. I truly enjoyed this, and I know Sawyer will someday too.
Connie

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, Connie :-) Brooke

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Great story in a poem... might have saved it for the next contest. Love the whole idea of a path that led back in time. So many great lines, but this is my favorite:

he wondered why horns would choose there to stick out. LOL!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Phyllis :-) Brooke

Comment from Pili Pubul

Exceptional

Such a wonderful story poem that will fascinate Sawyer for many years and so many children, I enjoy the story so much, fabulous realistic, great images, I love the name LOL , you are so good at that !!!! Perfect style, rhyme and Miranda's picture , perfection.... Pili

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Pili, thank you so very much for your graciousness and generosity :-) Brooke

reply by Pili Pubul on 01-Sep-2014

Oh, you are soooooo good poet. Big smile. Pili

Comment from L.M.Mullins

Excellent

Brooke,

Excellent children's story poem. I can already picture the cover for the book. The rhythm and rhyme are great and make for a wonderful read for a child.
Len

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Len, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Exceptional

How fabulous is this!!!!!!! I loved the whole magnificent story, i loved all the brilliant rhyme, the alliteration and the wonderful characterisation of" harry" you are a true talent, and every poem is great but this is super great , worth every star,
Andrew

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Andrew, thank you so very much for your generosity and encouragement :-) Brooke

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Lovely rhyming poem, so easy to read, so melodic. You have a wonderful talent!

Thank you very much for this delightful posting!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Fridayauthor, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Brooke, this is a well written poem, with great rhythm and rhyming. I enjoyed reading it and know that children will enjoy having it read to them. Nicely done. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Miss Sally :-) Brooke

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

This is a cute poem. I love those musical names you come up with Brooke. They are entertaining by their selves. I love those Jabberwockey poems too don't you? I guess it's the child within. This poem is amusing as all get out. Love the picture of Sawyer and that beast! Wonder how big they are when they are babies? Wouldn't want to meet one in real life. No sir! Good job. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

I'm with you - no real life dino encounters LOL Thanks so much, Nancy :-) Brooke