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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another lovey acrostic written in free verse. I know what you mean about the title, I've had to shorten mine a few times for the same reason. This is another fine declaration of your love of God, and an excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Another lovey acrostic written in free verse. I know what you mean about the title, I've had to shorten mine a few times for the same reason. This is another fine declaration of your love of God, and an excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the read, sharing experiences, this good review and good wishes.
Comment from Ross E Silke
A very devotional and through provoking acrostic poem here; you put lots of good thoughts into it to help feed the reader an encouraging word to look to the Word of God and not man's own philosophies and wisdom. I appreciate your poem very much and glad I took time to read through it. Maybe some careful tightening might help to tighten your poem more to create less repetition and tighter sentence structure as, I found, it was a big difficult to read through at first and might benefit from more editing for a tighter read with smoother flow.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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A very devotional and through provoking acrostic poem here; you put lots of good thoughts into it to help feed the reader an encouraging word to look to the Word of God and not man's own philosophies and wisdom. I appreciate your poem very much and glad I took time to read through it. Maybe some careful tightening might help to tighten your poem more to create less repetition and tighter sentence structure as, I found, it was a big difficult to read through at first and might benefit from more editing for a tighter read with smoother flow.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this review with good suggestions.
Comment from livelylinda
Seems to be excessively wordy, redundant, hysterical. I have a strong faith in God and can sum up my understanding of our Father in one word . . .LOVE. You say that clarity of word and thought is important to you yet this is a rambling writing that takes way too many turns. It all can be explained in a loving, peaceful, kind manner which can be felt as well as understood. Just my opinion. Linda
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Seems to be excessively wordy, redundant, hysterical. I have a strong faith in God and can sum up my understanding of our Father in one word . . .LOVE. You say that clarity of word and thought is important to you yet this is a rambling writing that takes way too many turns. It all can be explained in a loving, peaceful, kind manner which can be felt as well as understood. Just my opinion. Linda
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Acrostic poem. When we start walking with the God and talkto Him more and more, we will know more about what He wants from us and He accepts us with open arms.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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A very well-written Acrostic poem. When we start walking with the God and talkto Him more and more, we will know more about what He wants from us and He accepts us with open arms.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the read, the suggestions, sharing experiences and this good review.
Comment from Cherubel
The perfect reasons why he is God and only man may insist that all this is a demanding nature and to inform the creation is our constant struggle to be more inquired of by our giver of in essence everything and what he takes back is for us if we aspired to his demands and each being different than the other it is measurable to what justice provides in amounts and times of which are equal for his doing and when he is not returning then much is in order and yet no order left unaccounted. Out of all this we are to remain confident because he wants our trust to be all we may be required of.
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The perfect reasons why he is God and only man may insist that all this is a demanding nature and to inform the creation is our constant struggle to be more inquired of by our giver of in essence everything and what he takes back is for us if we aspired to his demands and each being different than the other it is measurable to what justice provides in amounts and times of which are equal for his doing and when he is not returning then much is in order and yet no order left unaccounted. Out of all this we are to remain confident because he wants our trust to be all we may be required of.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
I like the fact that your first line is the same as the title of the acrostic.
It's true that God knows our needs better than anybody else.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I like the fact that your first line is the same as the title of the acrostic.
It's true that God knows our needs better than anybody else.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual acrostic which would benefit by shorter lines to give it more impact, that is just a suggestion, the overall sentiment is there filled with faith and hope, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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An unusual acrostic which would benefit by shorter lines to give it more impact, that is just a suggestion, the overall sentiment is there filled with faith and hope, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from tbacha58
You have written one of the most real realities of what we should expect from our God. Believing in God is the beautiful love one can ever have. He created the world; He is Thee one and only one, those who will know how to love Him should be the happiest human being on this earth. You made your point through writing, keep believing and I will keep believing. Thank you.Good luck. Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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You have written one of the most real realities of what we should expect from our God. Believing in God is the beautiful love one can ever have. He created the world; He is Thee one and only one, those who will know how to love Him should be the happiest human being on this earth. You made your point through writing, keep believing and I will keep believing. Thank you.Good luck. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for sharing your experiences and this good review.
Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for Sharing this message. Some of the capitalized letters blended into the Acrostic words but message is still discernable. God's Blessings to you also.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for Sharing this message. Some of the capitalized letters blended into the Acrostic words but message is still discernable. God's Blessings to you also.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from susand3022
Dear Al Creator Litt Dear, While your Acrostic is just fine... like the last one... I looked up Acrostics and as it turns out the title of the Acrostic doesn't have to be the word or words that you use for the Acrostic... so in that case you aren't being any different. However, as the poem you posted is pretty much the same as you posted before, and you aren't supposed to do that, well...
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Dear Al Creator Litt Dear, While your Acrostic is just fine... like the last one... I looked up Acrostics and as it turns out the title of the Acrostic doesn't have to be the word or words that you use for the Acrostic... so in that case you aren't being any different. However, as the poem you posted is pretty much the same as you posted before, and you aren't supposed to do that, well...
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
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Thank you. You have missed reading Author's Notes. I would like to give you the note for your reference,
Acrostic: WALK TALK WITH GOD CLARIFY ME GODS WORDS (God's used as GODS)
Title: Clarify Me God's Words
Please be sure, I have fulfilled the prompt or requirement of the contest; you know, this site does not offer longer space to use a long title for a work; so, the title is different from the acrostic words for the acrostic poem
Word: God's have been written as G O D S for making it an acrostic.
I hope, now it is clear.
You may clarify your point for I do not understand where I have made the mistake, so that I can change if needed.
Thank you once again for expressing your viewpoint.