The Secret of Happiness!
A 15 Word Poem; Give, but expect nothing in return132 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Wow! Well-written. This was not an easy writing prompt/contest. I'm impressed with your 15 words/25 syllables and the underlying message your words produced. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow! Well-written. This was not an easy writing prompt/contest. I'm impressed with your 15 words/25 syllables and the underlying message your words produced. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from jenintorre
What a truly uplifting poem you have written and a excellent entry for the 15 word competition. I would give you six stars but I bave none left. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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What a truly uplifting poem you have written and a excellent entry for the 15 word competition. I would give you six stars but I bave none left. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent advise in the well written 15 word poem.
Nice choice of artwork to compliment your work.
I especially liked the second line. When we expect nothing in return - ever.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent advise in the well written 15 word poem.
Nice choice of artwork to compliment your work.
I especially liked the second line. When we expect nothing in return - ever.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Nanny 6
You definitely define the secret of happiness in this poem... Beautiful picture to accompany your work. You accomplished a wonderful message in so few words, good luck in the contest.
Judy
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You definitely define the secret of happiness in this poem... Beautiful picture to accompany your work. You accomplished a wonderful message in so few words, good luck in the contest.
Judy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from kathleenspalding
This is a clever way to fulfill the contest requirements as well as deliver a true and uplifting message. (And it's a happy-accident acrostic to boot!) Only one suggestion, see what you think - What if you used dialogue punctuation?
"Give always more,
Expect nothing in return ever!
Truly, be happy forever."
Says a seer!
That's it. Good luck in the contest!
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This is a clever way to fulfill the contest requirements as well as deliver a true and uplifting message. (And it's a happy-accident acrostic to boot!) Only one suggestion, see what you think - What if you used dialogue punctuation?
"Give always more,
Expect nothing in return ever!
Truly, be happy forever."
Says a seer!
That's it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
You incorporate the two requested words in seamlessly. I love the notion of being happy from the act of generosity as this builds not only good karma but good juju!
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You incorporate the two requested words in seamlessly. I love the notion of being happy from the act of generosity as this builds not only good karma but good juju!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from mermaids
Your theme of giving is so true. We become happy when we give. Your second line is full of wisdom, expect nothing in return. That is what makes giving so important. Excellent use of words.
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Your theme of giving is so true. We become happy when we give. Your second line is full of wisdom, expect nothing in return. That is what makes giving so important. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, creative,
and have a great message. I agree totally with your message.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme and words
of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are strong, creative,
and have a great message. I agree totally with your message.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme and words
of this poem.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from Artasylum
A very nice, poignant thought to throw out into the world... So, good that! And great, good luck in the contest. thanks so much for your poem and looking forward. yours, diana
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A very nice, poignant thought to throw out into the world... So, good that! And great, good luck in the contest. thanks so much for your poem and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
Comment from royowen
The only problem with giving, is the proverb, "Give and it shall be given back to you, overflowing, pressed together and shaken, shall be in your lap." so we give to get! Heh heh, but you are right, a good tree produces good fruit. An excellent entry in this contest. Good luck, blessings, Roy
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The only problem with giving, is the proverb, "Give and it shall be given back to you, overflowing, pressed together and shaken, shall be in your lap." so we give to get! Heh heh, but you are right, a good tree produces good fruit. An excellent entry in this contest. Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
