The Night
This poem describes the mysterious beauty and magical music of the night.139 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to you firdousy
I like your entry poem
It caught my attention when you said--
the moon
Goes on melting in the sky
Night sings lullaby.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hello to you firdousy
I like your entry poem
It caught my attention when you said--
the moon
Goes on melting in the sky
Night sings lullaby.
Gert
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and for this great comment.I am glad.
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smiles
Gert
Comment from Black_Oxygen
When the senile moon
Goes on melting in the sky
Night sings lullaby.
With very few words, this poetry paints a vivid image. The
attached photo is the perfect accent to enhance the message.
Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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When the senile moon
Goes on melting in the sky
Night sings lullaby.
With very few words, this poetry paints a vivid image. The
attached photo is the perfect accent to enhance the message.
Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for this great review.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well.
That line is thought provoking and gave the reader something to think about. The artwork was great and enhanced the read. Thank you....harmony13
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well.
That line is thought provoking and gave the reader something to think about. The artwork was great and enhanced the read. Thank you....harmony13
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much for your ever so lovely comment.I am glad that you Like it.
Comment from alexgeorge
What a poetic way to describe the moon waxing/waning. Another fabulous haiku that manages to get a message across with the use of so few words.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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What a poetic way to describe the moon waxing/waning. Another fabulous haiku that manages to get a message across with the use of so few words.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi Alexgeorge,
Thanks so much for your kind review.I am glad that you like the poem..take care.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Firdousy,
What a wonderful piece of poetry!
It beautifully depicts moon's drowsiness on its way to sound sleep in the lap of 'Caring Night'.
Its wording is simple having spontaneous, melodious flow with nice rhyming scheme, lively imagery and pictorial quality. It meets the required parameters.
'..senile moon/ ...melting in the sky/ Night sings lullaby.'
Superb! Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hello Firdousy,
What a wonderful piece of poetry!
It beautifully depicts moon's drowsiness on its way to sound sleep in the lap of 'Caring Night'.
Its wording is simple having spontaneous, melodious flow with nice rhyming scheme, lively imagery and pictorial quality. It meets the required parameters.
'..senile moon/ ...melting in the sky/ Night sings lullaby.'
Superb! Best of Luck!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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WoW! Thank you so much for this excellent review.I am overwhelmed.You have explained my poem beautifully.Thanks again.
Comment from emjaihammond
What a grand thought! Loved the melting moon reference. It is so simple yet such a surprise. Loved reading this.
It is a great picture to use as well, and I think that was necessary
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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What a grand thought! Loved the melting moon reference. It is so simple yet such a surprise. Loved reading this.
It is a great picture to use as well, and I think that was necessary
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Aah!Thank you so much for such a wonderful review.I am glad that you like my poem.
Comment from chasennov
'The Night.' As lovely a poem as I could have written as well, if I had your skills. I loved the image of the moon of this poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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'The Night.' As lovely a poem as I could have written as well, if I had your skills. I loved the image of the moon of this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Oh Thank you so much for your excellent review.I am glad that you like my poem.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'The Night' is a well-written and intriguing piece. Considering the power the moon exerts, I would find it impossible to think of it as senile. This was an interesting poem to review.
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'The Night' is a well-written and intriguing piece. Considering the power the moon exerts, I would find it impossible to think of it as senile. This was an interesting poem to review.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your review.
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firdousy, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful poem. It is short and to the point. I have never heard the moon called senile before, but it has always been linked to altered mental states, and werewolf stories. This paints a vivid picture.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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This is a beautiful poem. It is short and to the point. I have never heard the moon called senile before, but it has always been linked to altered mental states, and werewolf stories. This paints a vivid picture.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.I am glad that you like my little poem.I appreciate your kind words.
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No problem.
Comment from Dibul
Beautiful 5/7/5 this one! As I read it, I looked at the picture, and saw the moon melting in the sky. Great imagery. The syllable count is perfect and the picture is gorgeous.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Beautiful 5/7/5 this one! As I read it, I looked at the picture, and saw the moon melting in the sky. Great imagery. The syllable count is perfect and the picture is gorgeous.
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much Divya for your sweet and lovely comment.I am glad that you like the poem.
