All Those Puzzling Pieces
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Comment from K.W.
Excellent! Love the rhyme within what seems a stream of consciousness. Good rhythm and cadence. Strong, vivid language gets your emotions across. Love the final stanza. Great work:) best, k
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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Excellent! Love the rhyme within what seems a stream of consciousness. Good rhythm and cadence. Strong, vivid language gets your emotions across. Love the final stanza. Great work:) best, k
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013
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thx so much k!
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my pleasure:)