Comment from
amarherig14
This is a great Spiritual poem. In this write you have God speaking to the youth of today. Like you said this also applies to adults.I like the format and the words used to deliver your message. Well written with good rhyme and smooth flow of lines for an easy reading. Good luck.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
Thank you so much for very well written review, very informative and to the point. Love it. Sarah
reply by amarherig14 on 29-Nov-2011
Sarah, are welcome.Blessings,Margie.
Comment from
jmawithoutwax
I really enjoyed this poem. It was poignant and very true to heart. It didn't feel forced or at all false. I liked that you took time with your grammar and punctuation because it helped the poem. It was well received on my end and well understood.
Great job!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
Thank you so much for very well written review, it was very informative and to the point. Thank's also for giving me 6 stars. Sarah