POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from skye
There is nothing so wonderful as a child, and nothing can break your heart so completely as when that child is gone.
Your poem is beautiful, the photo is glorious, and that smile..... wow.
Very well done.
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There is nothing so wonderful as a child, and nothing can break your heart so completely as when that child is gone.
Your poem is beautiful, the photo is glorious, and that smile..... wow.
Very well done.
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Skye
My favorite thing about him is remembering that smile. It was always there. Thanks so much. CArol
Comment from Judian James
Oh, these pieces break my heart more than any of the other sad pieces all put together. How precious Michael was and what a beautiful tribute to your darling boy.
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Oh, these pieces break my heart more than any of the other sad pieces all put together. How precious Michael was and what a beautiful tribute to your darling boy.
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Jude
I appreciate your kind comments...He will always hold my heart in his hands regardless of where he is at. Thanks CArol
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There are several of you on site who have lost a child. I am so sorry for your loss
Comment from RebelRose
He's adorable. I don't know the story behind this but I can tell that he was special. Is he the little bot you wrote about in your writing that I read last night (I think he was called Johnny)? This is a lovely poem.
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He's adorable. I don't know the story behind this but I can tell that he was special. Is he the little bot you wrote about in your writing that I read last night (I think he was called Johnny)? This is a lovely poem.
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RebelRose
No, Johnny is my handicapped son...Micheal died at 4 while we were on vacation. Black clouds tend to follow me around. Thank you much. Carol
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My Goodness, you have been through so much. I know it was a sad time in your life but I gather from your writing that it somehow made you stronger or added to the strength you obviously already possessed.
Comment from FredCollingwood
what a great looking boy. Thank you for sharing. I feel the same way about each of my two daugters--nothing more important in the world.
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what a great looking boy. Thank you for sharing. I feel the same way about each of my two daugters--nothing more important in the world.
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Fred
Thank you for your kind thoughts. He gave me many memories to remember him by. Carol
Comment from Sasha
This is lovely. Deeply moving, and reached into my chest and tugged at my heart. What lovely tribute to your son who gave you 4 wonderful years. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I know I say that all the time, but I really do mean it.
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This is lovely. Deeply moving, and reached into my chest and tugged at my heart. What lovely tribute to your son who gave you 4 wonderful years. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I know I say that all the time, but I really do mean it.
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Sash
Thank you for the kind thoughts and sincere wishes. He was a joy and left me with many memories and a heart filled with love. Carol
Comment from S.Yocom
Dear Carol, I think that the hardest thing to bear in life must be the loss of a child. Your darling son has given you wonderful memories which I know you cherish. Thank you for sharing his picture and for writing this sweet little poem.
Sally
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Dear Carol, I think that the hardest thing to bear in life must be the loss of a child. Your darling son has given you wonderful memories which I know you cherish. Thank you for sharing his picture and for writing this sweet little poem.
Sally
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Sally
He gave me many memories and a heart full of love. Thank you for the kind review. CArol
Comment from Auroraboreal800
What a beautiful and special gift is this poem and the lovely and sweet picture of your son Michael... Nice verse, nice sentiment... GREAT job!!
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What a beautiful and special gift is this poem and the lovely and sweet picture of your son Michael... Nice verse, nice sentiment... GREAT job!!
:)
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Aurora
Thank you for reading and expressing such kind sentiments. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from Shirley B
What a beautiful poem. The love between a mother and a son can never be replaced or forgotten. this is a beautiful poem. It brought tears to my eyes. It made me miss my son. He is just in Texas and I am in Oklahoma. Blessings to you. Shirley
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What a beautiful poem. The love between a mother and a son can never be replaced or forgotten. this is a beautiful poem. It brought tears to my eyes. It made me miss my son. He is just in Texas and I am in Oklahoma. Blessings to you. Shirley
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Shirley
Thank you so much. Every time I look at his smiling picture I can remember just how special his love was. I was blessed even if it was only for four years. Thanks CArol
Comment from poetaster
Thank you for baring yourself so simply and eloquently. I think the author notes are just as beautiful as the poem itself. God bless you and Michael always.
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Thank you for baring yourself so simply and eloquently. I think the author notes are just as beautiful as the poem itself. God bless you and Michael always.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Poetaster
Thank you for sharing Micheal's smile and all the love he gives. Carol
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very precious little boy. Children burrow themselves into our hearts. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.
I apologize, I meant to give you five stars.
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This is a very precious little boy. Children burrow themselves into our hearts. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.
I apologize, I meant to give you five stars.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Charlie
Four stars, huh? I don't think I know how to improve on this one so I will simply say thank you. Carol
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My mistake. I meant to give you five stars. I've corrected it.
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Thank you...Michael will smile on you always.
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You're welcome, Carol. Charlie