Comment from samsaysagain

Good

Good. very nice haiku except I count 6 syllables in the second line. Colors are good. Easy to picture a cinema while viewing it. Nice.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Hi Sam, changed it...high fever...LOL...thank you so much...

reply by samsaysagain on 10-Feb-2015

Fle bug doesn't count against you! LOL Thanks for the reply.

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

boy I hope not...LOL...so welcome...and thank you...

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

nature's show-----------------3
magnificentley viewed---6 should be 5. Also MAGNIFICENTLY
cinema----------------------3
Sorry about the four but the syllable count is material to the contest. When you change I will upgrade

Upgraded. Hope you feel better

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

that's ok Erica, I had to fix it...we are dealing with a sick mind tonight...I have a fever...LOL...thank you for the help...

Comment from skye

Excellent

Love the rewrite. Get well soon.

nature's show
magnificentley viewed -- 6 syllables
cinema
Not a 3-5-3, but a nice poem.
It is truly a movie when the seasons change.
Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Hi Skye, I changed it...I do the 5-7-5 form so much...I just made it a 5...I have a fever...and I wasn't watching...LOL...thank you for the help...I'll work on it now...LOL...luff Linda xxoo