All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 " One Pure Note"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of writing that tells the story of restoration uplifting from the depths of depression to the realm of happiness. well done
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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This is a nice piece of writing that tells the story of restoration uplifting from the depths of depression to the realm of happiness. well done
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx so much Perp!
Comment from mommerry
I found both a soothing and an inspiring message in your lovely verse. Yes, the high is much greater when you have suffered prior to seeing the goodness that is there if we but look with the right eye and attitude. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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I found both a soothing and an inspiring message in your lovely verse. Yes, the high is much greater when you have suffered prior to seeing the goodness that is there if we but look with the right eye and attitude. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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thx so much mommerry!
Comment from snemes
Can you write a poem that inspires? You certainly can! I enjoyed reading it from the first stanza to the last. Happiness is not a myth, it's music in the mists, and I can find it. So well-written and lovely. You are right. Uplifting is more appreciated after despair. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Can you write a poem that inspires? You certainly can! I enjoyed reading it from the first stanza to the last. Happiness is not a myth, it's music in the mists, and I can find it. So well-written and lovely. You are right. Uplifting is more appreciated after despair. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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oh bless you my dear - for reading, enjoying, understanding, AND for your lovely magic '6'! So appreciated!
Comment from prayingpoet
Aww, uplifting, "note sung in exultation" Nicely written, good flow, very creative, and I hope it will help smooth my poor tired brain! Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Aww, uplifting, "note sung in exultation" Nicely written, good flow, very creative, and I hope it will help smooth my poor tired brain! Great job.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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thank you so much Janice - I enjoyed writing this one! :)
Comment from Gungalo
now I see a strand of warm
golds, high skies, treasured birds
of white grace, and blues
so deep and luscious pleasured
I can plunge my hands in, never measured,
and come out overflowing
in all five senses
So true how things can change in a flash. They are the things the guide us through our lives and remain to see us though.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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now I see a strand of warm
golds, high skies, treasured birds
of white grace, and blues
so deep and luscious pleasured
I can plunge my hands in, never measured,
and come out overflowing
in all five senses
So true how things can change in a flash. They are the things the guide us through our lives and remain to see us though.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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they do indeed, Gungalo - and thank God they do!! :)
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You are so right.
Comment from fairy77
This was excellent and took me to a specia place.The sea and it's and meaning were very nice.The layout and part of happiness was refreshing.Good luck Sharyn yah damn genius haha!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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This was excellent and took me to a specia place.The sea and it's and meaning were very nice.The layout and part of happiness was refreshing.Good luck Sharyn yah damn genius haha!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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can't hide from you, can I?
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh I LOVE this free verse poem! It is magnificently uplifting. The language is so powerful, and it flows like a dream. The occasional rhyme is wonderful as well. This is a marvelous entry, in my humble opinion.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Oh I LOVE this free verse poem! It is magnificently uplifting. The language is so powerful, and it flows like a dream. The occasional rhyme is wonderful as well. This is a marvelous entry, in my humble opinion.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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well we always love your humble opinions Dawn!
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Oh, I'm so glad you are pleased. It's a beautiful poem!
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:)
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely photo for a beautifully and cleverly written poem. Your wording is exquisite lending itself to its imagery which is wonderfully seen throughout this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Lovely photo for a beautifully and cleverly written poem. Your wording is exquisite lending itself to its imagery which is wonderfully seen throughout this poem.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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So glad you enjoyed this one Deborah!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very powerful contest entry. It is uplifting and inspirational. Great comparison and meets the contest requirements. Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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A very powerful contest entry. It is uplifting and inspirational. Great comparison and meets the contest requirements. Good luck in the contest!!! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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thx so much Debbie!
Comment from c_lucas
Happiness is like sinking in water. If you hold your breath, you will rise again. A perfect note of happiness can be compared to your next breath of air. It keep you going.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Happiness is like sinking in water. If you hold your breath, you will rise again. A perfect note of happiness can be compared to your next breath of air. It keep you going.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Bless you Charlie! What a nice review!