Fire Inside
A short poem162 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Vincent ...
Under a most appropriate picture at the top, what you have written in these three short lines tells a realistic story providing your readers with vivid imagery.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Hullo Vincent ...
Under a most appropriate picture at the top, what you have written in these three short lines tells a realistic story providing your readers with vivid imagery.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Bill Schott
Your five-seven-five manages to send the message that someone has rekindled the furnace for the showing of emotions that will radiate outward. Nice.
Your five-seven-five manages to send the message that someone has rekindled the furnace for the showing of emotions that will radiate outward. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Taurean Monkey
You can't tell that this wasn't easy to pen, Vincent. It's a fabulous 5-7-5 poem. Great image - not sure whose it is - to accompany your fine write. It burns of passion :-) A pleasure to read, regards, TMonkey
You can't tell that this wasn't easy to pen, Vincent. It's a fabulous 5-7-5 poem. Great image - not sure whose it is - to accompany your fine write. It burns of passion :-) A pleasure to read, regards, TMonkey
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from fastdigits
the flames of love in seventeen
syllables painting a picture with
words of the intensity of the flame
of desire that is in your heart.
Well done
the flames of love in seventeen
syllables painting a picture with
words of the intensity of the flame
of desire that is in your heart.
Well done
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written poem makes good use of every syllable to pay tribute to someone who awakens a fiery passion for life in another.
Your well-written poem makes good use of every syllable to pay tribute to someone who awakens a fiery passion for life in another.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from cvcopac
5/7/5 alright. It has continuity, comprhension and reads well; has good imagery, is passionate, and is supported by a great picture and colors.
5/7/5 alright. It has continuity, comprhension and reads well; has good imagery, is passionate, and is supported by a great picture and colors.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your 5-7-5 poem is very good. Syllable count is excellent. Great picture choice with great imagery expressing your feelings. Good luck in the contest.
Your 5-7-5 poem is very good. Syllable count is excellent. Great picture choice with great imagery expressing your feelings. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from Barlock
I liked it. Nicely said.
A very smart use of "you're" to maintain a number of syllables in the third line.
A very appropriate art work.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
JB
I liked it. Nicely said.
A very smart use of "you're" to maintain a number of syllables in the third line.
A very appropriate art work.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
JB
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Wow, your first one, huh? Great job with this piece as it was very romantic and dreamy. There was good use of imagery as well. Kudos.
Wow, your first one, huh? Great job with this piece as it was very romantic and dreamy. There was good use of imagery as well. Kudos.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012
Comment from mauial
I take this poem to mean that someone who had lost hope for love got that spark again from someone's heart that lit up his/ her life again. Nicely done.
I take this poem to mean that someone who had lost hope for love got that spark again from someone's heart that lit up his/ her life again. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2012