Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
102 total reviews
Comment from oNray
It would be nice if youth would shut their mouths and learn something. We have so much to offer that will allow them to approach life so much easier
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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It would be nice if youth would shut their mouths and learn something. We have so much to offer that will allow them to approach life so much easier
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Naray for your honest review, so true really! It says in our Good Bible that "the fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom." More respect is needed. With gratitude, Sarah
Comment from rchitwood
Very well said and I truly enjoyed reading your poem. It is very inspiring and has good description on where truth lies with Faith and honesty.Very good structure and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Very well said and I truly enjoyed reading your poem. It is very inspiring and has good description on where truth lies with Faith and honesty.Very good structure and smooth line flow.Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Rita for your detailed and wonderful review. It is heavenly. With kindness, Sarah
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It is deserved my friend, Rita
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Thank you so much Rita. With much appreciation, Sarah
Comment from linsbm
?mbrace Integrit¿'- two words that directs the mind
straight to the heart. Very strong words that will always linger in every reader's mind. The best way to the Kingdom of God is to live a life with honesty and truth. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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?mbrace Integrit¿'- two words that directs the mind
straight to the heart. Very strong words that will always linger in every reader's mind. The best way to the Kingdom of God is to live a life with honesty and truth. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I was really helpful. Sarah
Comment from cercie
Now that I am over 60 i look back and see what society has done and how integrity has changed. I taught my children right from wrong and them theirs but so many do not. It is simple. Your heart knows.
thank you
cercie
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Now that I am over 60 i look back and see what society has done and how integrity has changed. I taught my children right from wrong and them theirs but so many do not. It is simple. Your heart knows.
thank you
cercie
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Thank you Cerice for your heartfelt review. Sarah
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a wonderful little poem. It is well written, beautifully presented and the words in the poem are deep and meaningful on a subject that all parents can identify with.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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This is a wonderful little poem. It is well written, beautifully presented and the words in the poem are deep and meaningful on a subject that all parents can identify with.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your very inspiring review of my poem. It was really helpful. Sarah
Comment from Andrewfo
This poem has beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Its verses flow, delivering its message with poignancy, compassion and understanding. Its couplets are well balanced.
I enjoyed reading this and wish every young person had the same opportunity to read it and learn from it.
Thank you for posting it and sharing your heart with the world. It is so well written and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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This poem has beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Its verses flow, delivering its message with poignancy, compassion and understanding. Its couplets are well balanced.
I enjoyed reading this and wish every young person had the same opportunity to read it and learn from it.
Thank you for posting it and sharing your heart with the world. It is so well written and enjoyable.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your detailed review. Sarah
Comment from adewpearl
strong use of rhyming couplets
I like the consonance of M sounds in molding my army
good consonance of L sounds in leave no trails of lies
You deliver a meaningful message in a powerful way
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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strong use of rhyming couplets
I like the consonance of M sounds in molding my army
good consonance of L sounds in leave no trails of lies
You deliver a meaningful message in a powerful way
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you Brooke for reading and reviewing my poem so thoughtfully and in depth. I really appreciate it. With love and prayers, Sarah
Comment from estabuttons
This is beautiful and amazing. I love it and I need to read it everyday and I am going to forward it to my husband, daughter and son and grandsons...and son in law and daughter in law! All my friends and family need to read this and remind ourselves...it's a battle everday...AND we all have to be aware WHO has our back and is on our side and loves us always! Thank you Sarah!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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This is beautiful and amazing. I love it and I need to read it everyday and I am going to forward it to my husband, daughter and son and grandsons...and son in law and daughter in law! All my friends and family need to read this and remind ourselves...it's a battle everday...AND we all have to be aware WHO has our back and is on our side and loves us always! Thank you Sarah!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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This is a lovely reaction, especially the part about forwarding it to your, family and friends. Yes, its a battle every day, but we're given the wisdom to win from God's eternal source of power. Love itself! With much love, Sarah
Comment from peggles
This is a lovely verse
preparing your young for the years ahead
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
Your words paint a lovely loving picture
well done
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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This is a lovely verse
preparing your young for the years ahead
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
Your words paint a lovely loving picture
well done
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Thank you Peggles for your very well written and informative review, I love it when people explain things to me to make things clearer and fuller so to speak. Sarah
Comment from Frankeddy
Lovely poem well thought out and well written.
You have a great gift for rhyming which lets your verse flow freely.
Lovely accompanying picture.
Your background is bright and colorful, easy to read.
Great message
Well done. Frankeddy
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Lovely poem well thought out and well written.
You have a great gift for rhyming which lets your verse flow freely.
Lovely accompanying picture.
Your background is bright and colorful, easy to read.
Great message
Well done. Frankeddy
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem in such a detail. I really appreciate it as this is a great way to learn in the art. Sarah
