Death's Sadness
A sad day.121 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Small poem with a big meaning.When anyone passes away it is always a sad time.The wording is very clear,and the picture is just breath taking.
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Small poem with a big meaning.When anyone passes away it is always a sad time.The wording is very clear,and the picture is just breath taking.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
Comment from DALLAS01
You accomplished what this form is intended to do: present a thought provoking idea in a very limited amount of syllables. That can be quite challenging.
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You accomplished what this form is intended to do: present a thought provoking idea in a very limited amount of syllables. That can be quite challenging.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
Comment from skye
Poignant and touching. The loss of a life does stop the world. Beautiful emotions in the 5-7-5 format. Tender descriptions, terrific artwork.
Very well done.
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Poignant and touching. The loss of a life does stop the world. Beautiful emotions in the 5-7-5 format. Tender descriptions, terrific artwork.
Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
Comment from Connie C
You say so much in such a limited number of words. Someone who is admired is suddenly gone, and the "world" is "deeply saddened." Your choice of picture is an excellent match for your very fine 5-7-5. Best of luck to you in the contest. Connie
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You say so much in such a limited number of words. Someone who is admired is suddenly gone, and the "world" is "deeply saddened." Your choice of picture is an excellent match for your very fine 5-7-5. Best of luck to you in the contest. Connie
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
Comment from Sophiaalexandra
this was a really sad and tragic poem and i hope it wasn't true. wwas fiction? well it was well written and good luck with the contest. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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this was a really sad and tragic poem and i hope it wasn't true. wwas fiction? well it was well written and good luck with the contest. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. Unfortunately it is from the heart.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poem saddened me for it is always hard to lose one this admired and good. As a poem you well fit the constraints of the poetry. I hope that you get a good review from your compatriot's and do well in the first 3 places.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Your poem saddened me for it is always hard to lose one this admired and good. As a poem you well fit the constraints of the poetry. I hope that you get a good review from your compatriot's and do well in the first 3 places.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and kind review.
Comment from mushroom
very sad thoughts are conjured up after reading this, you have managed to get so much feeling into such a small piece, very emotional and thought provoking
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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very sad thoughts are conjured up after reading this, you have managed to get so much feeling into such a small piece, very emotional and thought provoking
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and kind review.
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork, It looks so peaceful.
It sets the mood for your poem
This is what I call a food for thought poem..Meaning after you read it you go mm.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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I love the artwork, It looks so peaceful.
It sets the mood for your poem
This is what I call a food for thought poem..Meaning after you read it you go mm.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Kevin C
This is a wonderful sad reflective 5-7-5 poem with great form. You have said so much and expressed grief so well in so few words. I love the artwork you also chose. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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This is a wonderful sad reflective 5-7-5 poem with great form. You have said so much and expressed grief so well in so few words. I love the artwork you also chose. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and kind review.
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--LOL! Love your username--boomachicka. Sounds like a chick I'd like in bed (no offense, please) :)
--Interesting picture image and title.
--Met the 5-7-5 syllable count requirement.
--"All the world deeply saddened
For the greatness lost."
Must have been a very beloved and prominent figure.
--Even death is sad to take him? Wow!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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--LOL! Love your username--boomachicka. Sounds like a chick I'd like in bed (no offense, please) :)
--Interesting picture image and title.
--Met the 5-7-5 syllable count requirement.
--"All the world deeply saddened
For the greatness lost."
Must have been a very beloved and prominent figure.
--Even death is sad to take him? Wow!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind words and kind review.