Steve's Story-Poems
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Comment from Shirley B
How could anyone be offended by this great poem and your wonderful sense of humor? This is humor, I hope! LOL But in all of these cases no one made the men do all these things they did it of their own free will. :-) Thank you for giving me a smile, Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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How could anyone be offended by this great poem and your wonderful sense of humor? This is humor, I hope! LOL But in all of these cases no one made the men do all these things they did it of their own free will. :-) Thank you for giving me a smile, Shirley
Comment Written 25-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Thanks, Shirley. If I made you smile then I've accomplished my purpose. I'm thinking of a series - Brief History of Britain, Brief History of the Bible etc.
Comment from Lise Deangelo
I love this poem! Its very funny and kind of a compliment to women, in a way; that they can inspire so ( no...I didn't say manipulate!) This poem is well-written and entertaining. Thank you for sharing. Lise
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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I love this poem! Its very funny and kind of a compliment to women, in a way; that they can inspire so ( no...I didn't say manipulate!) This poem is well-written and entertaining. Thank you for sharing. Lise
Comment Written 25-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Thanks, Lise. If I made you smile then I've accomplished my purpose. I'm thinking of a series - Brief History of Britain, Brief History of the Bible etc. What do you think?
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Definitely! I think you have a real talent. I would love to read more... Lise
Comment from Patrick Jordan
Well I like your misogynistic write, so arrest me! You played our feminine deception with tongue-in-cheek fun which I enjoyed.'
"Those who will not learn from History
Are doomed to repeat, that's not a mystery;
So I must flee to save my life,
Oh deadly peril, here comes the wife!"
Cool ending!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Well I like your misogynistic write, so arrest me! You played our feminine deception with tongue-in-cheek fun which I enjoyed.'
"Those who will not learn from History
Are doomed to repeat, that's not a mystery;
So I must flee to save my life,
Oh deadly peril, here comes the wife!"
Cool ending!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Thank you!
Comment from Espresso momma
No offense. You just filled us with a bit of history and laughter. So it should be acceptable for fS. Thanks, and have a great week end.:)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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No offense. You just filled us with a bit of history and laughter. So it should be acceptable for fS. Thanks, and have a great week end.:)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Thanks. If I made you smile then I've accomplished my purpose. I'm thinking of a series - Brief History of Britain, Brief History of the Bible etc. May have to brush up on a bit more history first.
Comment from el twelve
that was very well written, the description and the historical alanogies were nicely done. it was interesting and enjoyable to read.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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that was very well written, the description and the historical alanogies were nicely done. it was interesting and enjoyable to read.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2011
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Thanks. If I made you smile then I've accomplished my purpose. I'm thinking of a series - Brief History of Britain, Brief History of the Bible etc.