CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 149 "New Steps"A collection of poetry
105 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
This is an excellent write! "No guide, nor a map
Only a voice that says yes
Lost until found
Upon conceding...no digress" Oh yeah, that's great!!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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This is an excellent write! "No guide, nor a map
Only a voice that says yes
Lost until found
Upon conceding...no digress" Oh yeah, that's great!!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Judian....what an uplifting review! Thank you so much for highlighting that portion that you like! Humbly yours.......Sue
Comment from adewpearl
what I am about to say to you is something I do not say lightly at all because Emily Dickinson is my favorite poet in a very special way - but your poem reminds me of her in both structure and tone - I really can't let you know how high that praise is, but this is most lovely and profound.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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what I am about to say to you is something I do not say lightly at all because Emily Dickinson is my favorite poet in a very special way - but your poem reminds me of her in both structure and tone - I really can't let you know how high that praise is, but this is most lovely and profound.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Oh boy.......now considering how I can even respond to such an elevated review. I've only just started to write and now I am extremely humbled. Thank you so much for your review....I am as encouraged as I have ever been. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from Kingsland
this is a very good poetic piece written in fine form and format. You have used some very good phrasing to get your point across in this poem.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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this is a very good poetic piece written in fine form and format. You have used some very good phrasing to get your point across in this poem.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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John, I am very honored that you enjoyed this poem! Thank you so much for your view and all your comments! Much appreciated......Sue
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
wonderful poem, nicely written. the wording seems almost to whisper to the reader. the sentence structure and stanzas make the reading easy. good job.
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wonderful poem, nicely written. the wording seems almost to whisper to the reader. the sentence structure and stanzas make the reading easy. good job.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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El Gato, thank you for your review and comments. Very much appreciated......Sue
Comment from allborn66
It's a beautiful poem. I like the flow and the rhyming scheme. I like the way you punctuated the last line of the stanzas, very nice.
Barbara
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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It's a beautiful poem. I like the flow and the rhyming scheme. I like the way you punctuated the last line of the stanzas, very nice.
Barbara
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Barbara, thank you very much for this nice review and your specific comments! Very appreciative.......Sue
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
this is an excellent piece of work. it is well written and well presented. the flow is good, and it is short and easy to read
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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this is an excellent piece of work. it is well written and well presented. the flow is good, and it is short and easy to read
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Goldwell, I want to thank you for your review and your comments! So glad you like it! ...much appreciated....Sue
Comment from nitad
This one has quite a spiritual feel to it, as if it is guiding the reader to a place ... that place ... where they can be free of life's worries. Nicely done.
Take care,
Nita
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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This one has quite a spiritual feel to it, as if it is guiding the reader to a place ... that place ... where they can be free of life's worries. Nicely done.
Take care,
Nita
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Nitad, I want to thank you for your review and say your comments are so appreciated. Means so much.......Sue
Comment from Dark Knight
Decent rhyme scheme. Yes We can!! lol..The middle verse could have been stronger. Little more detail or expansion Other than that good job.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Decent rhyme scheme. Yes We can!! lol..The middle verse could have been stronger. Little more detail or expansion Other than that good job.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Yes we can! LOL!!!! AND "DO", we must! Dark Knight, I certainly appreciate your review and your honest critique! Very much appreciated....Sue
Comment from rama devi
Enigmatic and intriguing. I read it twice and think I know what you wish to impart, but I am not sure If my imagination is supplying the crux of it. This is wonderfully ambiguous leaving lots of options for interpretations. Thought provoking and ironic.
Love these lines:
Imprints only made
After humility...
No guide, nor a map
Only a voice that says yes
Warm Regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Enigmatic and intriguing. I read it twice and think I know what you wish to impart, but I am not sure If my imagination is supplying the crux of it. This is wonderfully ambiguous leaving lots of options for interpretations. Thought provoking and ironic.
Love these lines:
Imprints only made
After humility...
No guide, nor a map
Only a voice that says yes
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Rama....Thank you very much for your review and specific comments! Thank you for highlighting the parts that you 'felt'........much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from Joan E.
It sounds as though you made tentative steps, but with encouragement went down the "path."
I liked the use of "hallowed" and its repeat for emphasis, as well as "trampled," as contrast.
Thanks for sharing your personal victory.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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It sounds as though you made tentative steps, but with encouragement went down the "path."
I liked the use of "hallowed" and its repeat for emphasis, as well as "trampled," as contrast.
Thanks for sharing your personal victory.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Joan, there have been a couple of paths that were made tenatively, yes! And it's just as personally liberating to MAKE a decision as the actual outcome itself! Thank you for your review and specific comment on the contrast. Much appreciated........Sue