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A Lasting Peace Without the Tears

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Simply my feelings towards a lasting one.

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Comment from kanzazy
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A well written Strong thought provoking work

great informative and interesting notes
I agree 100 percent

strong points:

I wrap myself in any cause
for attention, even religion,
as to my ends I strive.

My friends came upon you,
already sacrificed,
I huddle and hide.


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2008


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2008
    Terrorists have always been among us and usually they were tribes that injoyed inflicting terror and then were wiped out. One band of Indians up the road was like this until the other tribes had enough and gathered together and destroyed them for their own survival. Thank you very much for this review and your compliments.
Comment from Burtan
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A good write. Thought provoking and well written. Good job.
I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2008


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2008
    Thank you very much for your review and compliments.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Beginning to end, a great read. You have expressed yourself well in this fine piece. I read your notes with great interest....Nice job. Hugs and smiles, Susanne

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2008


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2008
    In this review, you have told me so much using so little words. I bet a lot of writers wished I can follow this example.lol I thank you for it and your compliments.