The Pumpkin Pride
The Pumpkin story entry.2 total reviews
Comment from Ben B.
HAHAHAHA appropriate story for the upcoming Halloween season! It is a shame having a pandemic going on while at this but hey, take whatever you can get.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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HAHAHAHA appropriate story for the upcoming Halloween season! It is a shame having a pandemic going on while at this but hey, take whatever you can get.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(first line pumkin s/b pumpkin; I stayed [omit: through] six feet apart; omit the line about the legal guardians--doesn't sound apropos to child's voice; REWORD: we can't be out till 10pm needs to strike at this very instant--not sure what you mean)
Charming story; good work channeling a child's POV. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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(first line pumkin s/b pumpkin; I stayed [omit: through] six feet apart; omit the line about the legal guardians--doesn't sound apropos to child's voice; REWORD: we can't be out till 10pm needs to strike at this very instant--not sure what you mean)
Charming story; good work channeling a child's POV. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
