Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Aiona,
When brakes stop working on any conveyance, they should be fixed or the vehicle garaged. I like the double meaning of trailer here.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020

Thanks, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Oct-2020

No problem, Aiona
Joan

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for the tip and the auto mechanic lesson! (I just drive and have no clue how it all works so I'm in awe of your knowledge!)
Enjoyed the word play of brakes/break and trailer as a verb and noun. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

Short and to the point, this presentation is well done. Thank goodness for triple A! I appreciated your information in your author notes as well. best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks, equestrik.