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Peach Of The Beach

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Female lifeguard.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Lynette Martin
Excellent
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This is shaping up to be an excellent story. It's believable, and that I find to be one of the biggest problems in story writing, people don't make me believe their characters are real. Congratulations on a well written piece.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    HELLO LYNETTE: Thank you for your review. You are appreciated. I invite you to read my story, "Peach Of The Beach," from chapter to chapter as I write it, You will find it in my portfolio. Thank you. rhonnie69.
Comment from Susan X Smith
Excellent
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This is the beginning of an interesting story. It set the stage for a visit to an uncle in the Navy. It made me curious to find out more about what would happen on that visit.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    HELLO SUSAN: Thank you for your review. You are appreciated. I invite you to read my story, "Peach Of The Beach," from chapter to chapter as I write it. You will find it in my portfolio. Thank you. rhonnie69.
Comment from equestrik
Good
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Awe, this is a sweet write filled with love and companionship as well as the connection of one powerful woman to another. What a gift for both mother and daughter.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    HELLO EQUESTRIK: Thank you for your review. You are appreciated. I invite you to read my story, Peach Of The Beach," from chapter to chapter as I write it. You will find it in my portfolio. Thank you. rhonnie69.
reply by equestrik on 09-Oct-2020
    i will check it out, thank you