Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Blue Moon Over Grove"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
7 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your contribution to the Renga book with its spectacular picture and matching presentation. I appreciated your identification of the indigo bunting as a blue bird. The word "quivers" is also an excellent, action verb. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your contribution to the Renga book with its spectacular picture and matching presentation. I appreciated your identification of the indigo bunting as a blue bird. The word "quivers" is also an excellent, action verb. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I'm definitely gonna have to post soon.... love the 'realm' this one is in!! Love the 'spectacle' of the soft-spoken bunting.... thanx for sharing, Gypsy! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Oh, I'm definitely gonna have to post soon.... love the 'realm' this one is in!! Love the 'spectacle' of the soft-spoken bunting.... thanx for sharing, Gypsy! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Yay! Great, I can't wait to see what you write :)
Thank you very much for your insightful review and kind words. I appreciate it.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
With the author's note explaining what an indigo bunting is, this all became clear. It is a lovely poem, full of colour and repressed passion.
I feel really bad that I don't feel able to contribute to your book at the moment, but I feel over-taxed and it just goes from bad to worse each day.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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With the author's note explaining what an indigo bunting is, this all became clear. It is a lovely poem, full of colour and repressed passion.
I feel really bad that I don't feel able to contribute to your book at the moment, but I feel over-taxed and it just goes from bad to worse each day.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Katherine. No worries...The book is going to be around for a long time. I hope you are having a wonderful Sunday.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from amada
"blue moon over grose..." Such a beautiful and at the same time nostalgic phrase. It seems to transport the reader to an enchanted place. Lovely, Gypsy.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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"blue moon over grose..." Such a beautiful and at the same time nostalgic phrase. It seems to transport the reader to an enchanted place. Lovely, Gypsy.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from June Sargent
Great followup to the sun-kissed orchard. I love the reference to the indigo bunting. A peaceful scene that captures the magic of night when all creatures, great and small, are kissed by cool moonbeams.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Great followup to the sun-kissed orchard. I love the reference to the indigo bunting. A peaceful scene that captures the magic of night when all creatures, great and small, are kissed by cool moonbeams.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Wow, thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words and excellent review. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very beautiful, Gypsy. There is something about a blue moon that makes a bird want to sing.
Your Renga book is coming right along with beautiful verse.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Very beautiful, Gypsy. There is something about a blue moon that makes a bird want to sing.
Your Renga book is coming right along with beautiful verse.
Much enjoyed.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Wow, thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words and excellent review. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a gorgeous poem perfectly illustrated by your gorgeous picture! You have fun with the words "blue moon" which we will have this month. And then use that blue to move us to a bird - indigo bunting. And the bird's song as with all nature makes us quiver inside. Lovely!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This is a gorgeous poem perfectly illustrated by your gorgeous picture! You have fun with the words "blue moon" which we will have this month. And then use that blue to move us to a bird - indigo bunting. And the bird's song as with all nature makes us quiver inside. Lovely!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen. I could not have explained my poem better :) I appreciate your insightful feedback. Have a happy weekend.
hugs,
gypsy