Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Faith and Sorrow"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
23 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Enjoyed the prayer like nature of this piece. The lines about letting faith in God take the place of the painful stinging melancholies of death was a very profound statement. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Enjoyed the prayer like nature of this piece. The lines about letting faith in God take the place of the painful stinging melancholies of death was a very profound statement. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you Justin for your thoughtful review here, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Truly words to which I can relate here, Dolly -- great employment of your Reel to bring a bit of song to the acceptance and moving forward... :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Truly words to which I can relate here, Dolly -- great employment of your Reel to bring a bit of song to the acceptance and moving forward... :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you Yvette for your lovely review, I?m glad your enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment from seaglass
Thank you for introducing new style of poetry. I will have to give it a try. Hopefully the person for him you wrote his receiving comfort from your point.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for introducing new style of poetry. I will have to give it a try. Hopefully the person for him you wrote his receiving comfort from your point.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and your six stars, your words are appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Sugarray77
Thank you for this lovely tribute to Yvonne. It will be a comfort to her as she reads your words of comfort and solace. Well said, Dolly!!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this lovely tribute to Yvonne. It will be a comfort to her as she reads your words of comfort and solace. Well said, Dolly!!!
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you Melissa for your thoughtful review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned in your newest form, dear Dolly. I'm sure Yvonne loves this. I love this. Thank you for the wonderful offering and care for her.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Beautifully penned in your newest form, dear Dolly. I'm sure Yvonne loves this. I love this. Thank you for the wonderful offering and care for her.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you Sally for your review, glad you enjoyed this one and the new form, love Dolly x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Novenary Reel in comfort to Yvonne and her family who are dealing with the loss of a loved one. She will be so grateful for all the prayers and good wishes we send to her.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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A very well-written Novenary Reel in comfort to Yvonne and her family who are dealing with the loss of a loved one. She will be so grateful for all the prayers and good wishes we send to her.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Mary Vigasin
well done in describing how grief and pain can borrow deep into the skin and soul and the need for faith to heal.
Enjoyed your writing.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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well done in describing how grief and pain can borrow deep into the skin and soul and the need for faith to heal.
Enjoyed your writing.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you Mary for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think this flows so naturally that the rhyme scheme does not seem forced at all. What an interesting thought, that faith can help divert one's thoughts or painful shock.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I think this flows so naturally that the rhyme scheme does not seem forced at all. What an interesting thought, that faith can help divert one's thoughts or painful shock.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you Crystie for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from judiverse
Your poem is beautifully shaped. What a tragedy for Yvonne. It's hard for us to comprehend what it's like for the person going through this. Many people are praying and hoping for her to let healing begin. I hope she'll be back to us soon. Very touching, with some added hope. judi
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Your poem is beautifully shaped. What a tragedy for Yvonne. It's hard for us to comprehend what it's like for the person going through this. Many people are praying and hoping for her to let healing begin. I hope she'll be back to us soon. Very touching, with some added hope. judi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Judi for your review, your words mean a lot to me, love Dolly x
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You're very welcome. Have a great weekend. judi
Comment from Lucy de Welles
To hold another's hand through the stages of grief, til all is resolved in the place of relief. Lovely expression here of understanding, empathy, friendship and grace.
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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To hold another's hand through the stages of grief, til all is resolved in the place of relief. Lovely expression here of understanding, empathy, friendship and grace.
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Than you Lucy for your review, I enjoyed your words here and you are so right, love Dolly x