Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 74 "Rosy Dawn Over the Sea"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Rosy Dawn Over the Sea
by dovemarie
Hello, Marie,
Thank you very much for adding a chapter to our renga book. It fits with my 5/7/5. Well done!
Will you please add this information to your author notes? Thank you!
Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
(If you would like to read the previous chapters, copy and paste this link to your browser).
https://www.fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=39516
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Rosy Dawn Over the Sea
by dovemarie
Hello, Marie,
Thank you very much for adding a chapter to our renga book. It fits with my 5/7/5. Well done!
Will you please add this information to your author notes? Thank you!
Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
(If you would like to read the previous chapters, copy and paste this link to your browser).
https://www.fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=39516
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Dear Gypsy, thank you for giving me an opportunity to add to your book. I'm afraid I don't know how to copy and paste the link in order to read the previous chapters. Could you give a little info? I have "computer fright." Dove
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Hello, Dove,
No worries, I am available to help you anytime. You don't have to do anything especial, just copy and past like the rest of the text.
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful addition to Gypsy Blue's book. You used very beautiful imagery and very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Donna, This is a very beautiful addition to Gypsy Blue's book. You used very beautiful imagery and very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love, Teri
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Dear Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from Veenbee
The picture and color theme of this poem works very well. I feel as if I am on the water. You give the feeling of a whole days experience by mentioning the sunlight and the moon. Nicely done. Veenbee
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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The picture and color theme of this poem works very well. I feel as if I am on the water. You give the feeling of a whole days experience by mentioning the sunlight and the moon. Nicely done. Veenbee
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Dear Veenbee, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful image you've painted with words only... spiced with alliteration, your imagery is a wonderful vision for a relaxing evening... ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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A beautiful image you've painted with words only... spiced with alliteration, your imagery is a wonderful vision for a relaxing evening... ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvette, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a beautiful verse that flows with the seasonal nature of the write. Your inclusion of the word... moon.. at the very bottom is like an afterthought. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is a beautiful verse that flows with the seasonal nature of the write. Your inclusion of the word... moon.. at the very bottom is like an afterthought. An enjoyable read.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Dear Melissa thank you for your comments and review. Dove