My Second Marriage
a 5-7-512 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Divorce does leave one cold. But I didn't understand what followed. Was it the same woman or another woman? The picture, shows whoever it is she has your heart in her hands. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Divorce does leave one cold. But I didn't understand what followed. Was it the same woman or another woman? The picture, shows whoever it is she has your heart in her hands. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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New wife; new life.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem about a second marriage that provides the right kind of connection when we learned from the first marriage what was the wrong direction.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem about a second marriage that provides the right kind of connection when we learned from the first marriage what was the wrong direction.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a hopeful and ambient write and there is always someone else waiting in the wings if we are lucky, the search continues to find happiness with someone new, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is a hopeful and ambient write and there is always someone else waiting in the wings if we are lucky, the search continues to find happiness with someone new, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Mia Twysted
I have seen what divorce can do to a person and it is awful. This is a hopeful story that ends with love and happiness. It is good to remind people that there is always a silver lining.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I have seen what divorce can do to a person and it is awful. This is a hopeful story that ends with love and happiness. It is good to remind people that there is always a silver lining.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanks, Mia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like the presentation and the topic. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A great entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I like the presentation and the topic. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A great entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you, GBR
Comment from palmart
I assume divorce is like the bitter side of love, but sometimes it is a liberation and a change. We humans are social and despite of our little need of loneliness, we need to share our lives, so we keep on trying and betting for love. What a picture of a heart! That red can be called "red passion"! Great writing!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I assume divorce is like the bitter side of love, but sometimes it is a liberation and a change. We humans are social and despite of our little need of loneliness, we need to share our lives, so we keep on trying and betting for love. What a picture of a heart! That red can be called "red passion"! Great writing!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanks, palmart
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You`re very welcome! Have a great Week!!
Comment from Susan X Smith
You certainly meet the contest requirements, and the picture you chose emphasizes the message. I am guessing that this poem is based on the truth, so I will say I am happy for you that things turned out well.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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You certainly meet the contest requirements, and the picture you chose emphasizes the message. I am guessing that this poem is based on the truth, so I will say I am happy for you that things turned out well.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanks, Susan
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a love deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is a love deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you, TT
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You're welcome!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Nicely written. Divorce left me cold I can relate to this one. Now love thrives. Sometimes it's not meant to be the first time. Nice romantic piece.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is Nicely written. Divorce left me cold I can relate to this one. Now love thrives. Sometimes it's not meant to be the first time. Nice romantic piece.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Joanne
Comment from LisaMay
"love thrives in our lives" is such a nice sentiment. Hooray for this second chance at love. It sounds like you have a 'keeper' this time... the love of a good woman is to be treasured.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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"love thrives in our lives" is such a nice sentiment. Hooray for this second chance at love. It sounds like you have a 'keeper' this time... the love of a good woman is to be treasured.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you, LisaMay