Comment from karenina

Excellent

"The sedÅ?ka, consists of two tercets of five, seven, and seven syllables each." Thought I'd toss that in because many WILL and some WILL NOT know the form--and it's imperative to understand the brevity of your poem and to acknowledge that your count is correct. I like this. The brevity of 31 syllables forces you and the reader to hone in on the greatest ways we are affected. Special mention for your final two lines--rhyme is certainly not required, but it adds a "zing" with which to emphasize your point. Good luck!--Karenina

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for a great rev iew and apologies for a belated reply zanya

reply by karenina on 26-Sep-2020

You are welcome!--Karenina

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, the virus crisis has changed our daily routine drastically, Mystery Writer. You did a good job with the prompt. The 'daily toll' is a scary thing. Your words create great imagery.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for a great reveiw zanya

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I am fortunate to work in a nursing home but many individuals are working from home. I imagine I would be tempted to eat more snacks if I worked from home. Your words are true and I admire your smooth use of rhyming words.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya