Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "The lion..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh I do like your follow-on here, Roy, and the strength of the vision... especially with that awesome final line! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Oh I do like your follow-on here, Roy, and the strength of the vision... especially with that awesome final line! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir! ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thanks Yvette, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
Great artwork. It fits your poem perfectly. Your imagery of the lion and the lamb rising is excellent. It illustrates the hope for unity through God's grace. It's a triumph over evil that they do so. judi
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Great artwork. It fits your poem perfectly. Your imagery of the lion and the lamb rising is excellent. It illustrates the hope for unity through God's grace. It's a triumph over evil that they do so. judi
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much Judy. for your wonderful review and super comments, blessings Roy,
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God is so alive in our world. I pray to him often each day that changes our hearts and guides us so we can put an end to the issues we are having in our society. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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God is so alive in our world. I pray to him often each day that changes our hearts and guides us so we can put an end to the issues we are having in our society. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Barbara,. for your excellent review and comments, blessings Roy,
Comment from BethShelby
It is interesting that Christ is called both a lamb and a lion. You would think these are opposites. Of course Christ has many other names as well like a vine, living water, etc.
Good luck with your multi-author book. I too long winded for haikus.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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It is interesting that Christ is called both a lamb and a lion. You would think these are opposites. Of course Christ has many other names as well like a vine, living water, etc.
Good luck with your multi-author book. I too long winded for haikus.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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He?ll return as an avenging angel and the lion of Judah this time, our warrior King and yet the sacrificial Lamb. Thank you dear Beth for your kindness, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and
very nice presentation, Roy.
-You wrote a good poem
for this special project.
-A good topic and description.
-A very good satori line, too.
-I'll have to check out how
Gypsy's book is progressing.
-It's a really creative idea.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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-Beautiful artwork and
very nice presentation, Roy.
-You wrote a good poem
for this special project.
-A good topic and description.
-A very good satori line, too.
-I'll have to check out how
Gypsy's book is progressing.
-It's a really creative idea.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Yes, Gypsy is a genius, and a great poet, so much soul in her writing. Thanks Pam, for these refreshing words and kindness, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy, and thanks for sharing your poem. When I reviewed this, I thought it was interesting there would be two lion poems posted:) Then, Tony has his book about the lion!
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Bless you Pam
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and addition to the the multi-author Renga book about the lion and te lamb that will one day come together and will have peace with each other.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and addition to the the multi-author Renga book about the lion and te lamb that will one day come together and will have peace with each other.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Sandra, for your excellent comments and review, blessings Roy,
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Owen, you are back in the renga! Interesting entry. The lion and the lamb. What do I read in this? That one day the lion and the lamp will live together in peace and put to shame all those who ever proclaimed that impossible.
Oh, I so hope so! God is the greatest. I have faith.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Owen, you are back in the renga! Interesting entry. The lion and the lamb. What do I read in this? That one day the lion and the lamp will live together in peace and put to shame all those who ever proclaimed that impossible.
Oh, I so hope so! God is the greatest. I have faith.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Marjon, for your wonderful comments and lovely review, blessings Roy,
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this succinct testimony to the Lord - the Lion of Judah, the Lamb of God Who took away the sins of the world and the Good Shepherd Who cares for us all.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this succinct testimony to the Lord - the Lion of Judah, the Lamb of God Who took away the sins of the world and the Good Shepherd Who cares for us all.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Helen, for your lovely comments and excellent review, blessings Roy,
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent follow up to Gypsy's couplet and a fine addition to the Renga book.
It's interesting to see the different tone that each author brings to the book.
One typo in author notes:
Revelation 5:6 "And between the throne and the the four living creatutures (creatures) and among the elders I
Always a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Excellent follow up to Gypsy's couplet and a fine addition to the Renga book.
It's interesting to see the different tone that each author brings to the book.
One typo in author notes:
Revelation 5:6 "And between the throne and the the four living creatutures (creatures) and among the elders I
Always a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Gloria, for your terrific comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy,
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Roy,
What a perfect fit to follow my couplet of the lion. You are the master of spiritual poetry so I feel grateful for your addition to our renga book. I love the psalms... especially 23:6...and your choice of scripture fits in nicely. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Hello, Roy,
What a perfect fit to follow my couplet of the lion. You are the master of spiritual poetry so I feel grateful for your addition to our renga book. I love the psalms... especially 23:6...and your choice of scripture fits in nicely. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Gypsy, for your terrific comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy,