A Little Too Passionate
Lowku Poem Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Yeah, on a scale of disgusting that's rather gross. Why someone would want that job is beyond me. Not a pretty view at all. You've worked the syllable count well to present this.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Yeah, on a scale of disgusting that's rather gross. Why someone would want that job is beyond me. Not a pretty view at all. You've worked the syllable count well to present this.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks for the great review and generous stars, Lisa. Yeah, I was trying to be gross but not over the top disgusting. lol Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
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Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, what a job! At least he is getting some experience and with experience comes an expert diagnosis, ha ha ha, you made me smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, what a job! At least he is getting some experience and with experience comes an expert diagnosis, ha ha ha, you made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I really appreciate the generous stars and humorous comments. I'm glad you had a chuckle with this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
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Ron
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You too Ron x