The Miracle
A prayer15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This less-than-eighty-words story, The Miracle, falls within the word limit and is definitely a surprise and a miracle Terrific story to share.
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This less-than-eighty-words story, The Miracle, falls within the word limit and is definitely a surprise and a miracle Terrific story to share.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written eighty word surprise flash fiction about a prayer that is fulfill minutes after a prayer is answered by higher power to let you know everything is okay.
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A very well-written eighty word surprise flash fiction about a prayer that is fulfill minutes after a prayer is answered by higher power to let you know everything is okay.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful recounting of a miracle that God gave you. It might even have been a Stage 4 but that is nothing to God and He provided a case that the doctors could operate. Praising God with you.Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
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Wonderful recounting of a miracle that God gave you. It might even have been a Stage 4 but that is nothing to God and He provided a case that the doctors could operate. Praising God with you.Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Ah but the you soon found out that you were never alone. None of us is ever alone. We do hear comforting reassurance if we ask for it. Sometimes we just know. This is a lovely tribute to your relation with Mary Mother of God. I'm happy for you.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Ah but the you soon found out that you were never alone. None of us is ever alone. We do hear comforting reassurance if we ask for it. Sometimes we just know. This is a lovely tribute to your relation with Mary Mother of God. I'm happy for you.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from LisaMay
I am so glad for you that Mary provided hope and comfort by way of a miracle. I hope that your husband is recovering well.
I found the different colours and variation in typeface to be very distracting (and unnecessary in such a short story).
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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I am so glad for you that Mary provided hope and comfort by way of a miracle. I hope that your husband is recovering well.
I found the different colours and variation in typeface to be very distracting (and unnecessary in such a short story).
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Yes, he is cancer free for six years now, thanks God.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, miracles occur. There's power in prayer. He hears always. Your contest entry is in great form. I like the use of colored fonts. Your words create great imagery and emotion.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Yes, miracles occur. There's power in prayer. He hears always. Your contest entry is in great form. I like the use of colored fonts. Your words create great imagery and emotion.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you, kindly Jan.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt.
This short piece does have a surprise at the end for the character.
I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt.
This short piece does have a surprise at the end for the character.
I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very good image,
and an amazing story.
-Thanks for sharing the
notes and the story.
-How wonderful that
the news was good, and
your husband was fine.
-I can't imagine not being
together, much less in
two separate countries.
-I like the font choices,
and you tell the story very well.
-I am surprised you could do it
in 80 words!
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-A very good image,
and an amazing story.
-Thanks for sharing the
notes and the story.
-How wonderful that
the news was good, and
your husband was fine.
-I can't imagine not being
together, much less in
two separate countries.
-I like the font choices,
and you tell the story very well.
-I am surprised you could do it
in 80 words!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry with a surprise ending for the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
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This is a great entry with a surprise ending for the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from RShipp
The revelation of these NEW facts are certainly a welcomed 'surprise'!
Best of luck in the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt contest.
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The revelation of these NEW facts are certainly a welcomed 'surprise'!
Best of luck in the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020