Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Excellent

This piece was written much differently than any book I have ever read. Is this a particular style? I found it very sad, but sometimes uplifting. I was really confused because of the style. Well anyway, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020

Thanks Becky.
I hear that about my style all the time.
And yes, it is different!
And, it's a Gift that comes from above.
From the Mind, Heart, and Soul.
Basically, a "Journaling Gift"
Compose of grief. I've been honeing in harnessing for over seventeen years now.
It's important to look on the bright side right now.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

This was so intense, it was written in such a unique way the reader needed to envision the scene, I did not notice any errors, and would like to hear more.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Well I appreciate your time and review Joanne and have a blessed week!
Doctor Ricky 1024