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Comment from Judy Lawless
Liz, although the stories are disturbing, you've done a good job of conveying them through the voices of those who experienced it all. They need to be shared. On to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Liz, although the stories are disturbing, you've done a good job of conveying them through the voices of those who experienced it all. They need to be shared. On to the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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I'm so excited you are on a roll.
Thank you for that review. It put my chapter over the top and I received an award for Recognized status...cool huh?
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Liz, you are most welcome. Your stories deserve recognition! And I don't know if you realized how many of my chapters were raised to recognition with your reviews! Glad to be able to reciprocate. Hugs
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Comment from AJ McCall
This chapter had me on edge. The names... I can't stop loving them. There was one name I found in a book or diary I had read a while ago: Sweet-grass. The setting of this story is wonderful and emotional as I feel for every girl. I couldn't imagine what that actually is like. I don't want to know. I did notice a minor space in the sentence " Mr. Pack Man."
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This chapter had me on edge. The names... I can't stop loving them. There was one name I found in a book or diary I had read a while ago: Sweet-grass. The setting of this story is wonderful and emotional as I feel for every girl. I couldn't imagine what that actually is like. I don't want to know. I did notice a minor space in the sentence " Mr. Pack Man."
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic supportive review. I am glad I am getting to post these chapters. When I finished. I was so missing the girls. They are each so dear.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Fascinating, the story of each one of the girls when they were in the cave. Poor girls! What horrors have they been going through! Now it also becomes clear how useful it was to have Spring Blossom so alert all the time. What would they have done without their back packs?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Fascinating, the story of each one of the girls when they were in the cave. Poor girls! What horrors have they been going through! Now it also becomes clear how useful it was to have Spring Blossom so alert all the time. What would they have done without their back packs?
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic supportive review. I am glad I am getting to post these chapters. When I finished. I was so missing the girls. They are each so dear.
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I know what you mean. The characters we create in our books become like intimate friends. Welcome to the review!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
That is absolutely horrible that this is happening! Someone needs to do something about it and do it quick!
You need to share this story for awareness;-) Start a fundraiser for these teens and future teens;-)
Thank you for sharing;-) Many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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That is absolutely horrible that this is happening! Someone needs to do something about it and do it quick!
You need to share this story for awareness;-) Start a fundraiser for these teens and future teens;-)
Thank you for sharing;-) Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic supportive review. I am glad I am getting to post these chapters. When I finished. I was so missing the girls. They are each so dear. This is an epidemic problem with Native women and teens. Authorities do basically nothing about it. This has been going on for many years. The girls willl tell more about the statistics later.
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Comment from mark clement
Your ideas are just amazing and as person who has wrote from the native Americans perspective I can say this is wrote splendidly and I hope you continue writing this its lovely
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Your ideas are just amazing and as person who has wrote from the native Americans perspective I can say this is wrote splendidly and I hope you continue writing this its lovely
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic supportive review. I am so glad you are appreciating it. Please feel free to catch up by reading the preceding chapter in my portfolio. It is not necessary to review them, just enjoy them.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like and have enjoyed the theme, perfect adventurous taletelling, skimmed and organized plot development, curious ending; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I like and have enjoyed the theme, perfect adventurous taletelling, skimmed and organized plot development, curious ending; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic appreciative review. I spent an entire day reviewing you tubes of traveling through caves in the locale of this setting. It is a bit scary.
Comment from To Write Is To Live
I like how your writing is terse and concise, moving the story along without any wasted effort. Having each character telling her role in their escape made the story more realistic and believable. And having Rabbit's incomplete tale make me want to turn to the next chapter to see what happened to this character--will she be found?
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I like how your writing is terse and concise, moving the story along without any wasted effort. Having each character telling her role in their escape made the story more realistic and believable. And having Rabbit's incomplete tale make me want to turn to the next chapter to see what happened to this character--will she be found?
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic supportive review. You arte welcome to catch up on the previous chapters in my portfolio. There is no need to write a review, just enjoy them.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- such horrors in the whole kidnapping and human trafficking... Eyes of Owl's story gives the reader chills.... Oh, I hope they get to 'civilization' soon! ;) Thanx for sharing, Liz! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Wow -- such horrors in the whole kidnapping and human trafficking... Eyes of Owl's story gives the reader chills.... Oh, I hope they get to 'civilization' soon! ;) Thanx for sharing, Liz! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for you enthusiastic review. Unfortunately, theyhave to go through a cave. I spent the day watching you tubes of traveling through cavesin this locale. Scary!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping--grabs and holds interest--vivid imagery--skillful conveyance of terror, masterful narration. I dread to contemplate what further horror awaits. Well done! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Gripping--grabs and holds interest--vivid imagery--skillful conveyance of terror, masterful narration. I dread to contemplate what further horror awaits. Well done! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will give you a **spoiler** there is hardly a calm moment throughout this entire story.
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I kind of figured that!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping--grabs and holds interest--vivid imagery--skillful conveyance of terror, masterful narration. I dread to contemplate what further horror awaits. Well done! Cheers. LIZ
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Gripping--grabs and holds interest--vivid imagery--skillful conveyance of terror, masterful narration. I dread to contemplate what further horror awaits. Well done! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020