Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Snowy Freeze"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This renga couplet, The Snowy Freeze, has the requited syllables and continues the march into the depths of wintry weather.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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This renga couplet, The Snowy Freeze, has the requited syllables and continues the march into the depths of wintry weather.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you Bill for your review of this couplet, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from patcelaw
A well written contribution to the book. It is presented beautifully. May your day be overflowing with blessings from God.
Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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A well written contribution to the book. It is presented beautifully. May your day be overflowing with blessings from God.
Patricia
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you Patricia for reviewing this couplet, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent addition to Gypsy's collaborative Renga book.
You have shown the winter to be peaceful even within the grip of snowy ice. And that is a gift.
Thank you so much always for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Excellent addition to Gypsy's collaborative Renga book.
You have shown the winter to be peaceful even within the grip of snowy ice. And that is a gift.
Thank you so much always for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you Gloria for your review, glad you enjoyed this couplet, you encouraged me to contribute with your post, love Dolly x
Comment from Ricky1024
That is debatable there so many different forms now poetry.
Renga referring to a haiku.
I generally don't like short things like that because the way my mind works I cycle from above and it comes fast and it comes powerful and it comes in great stanzas.
I would actually have to turn off the plumbing from above to get to the point where my own mind would accept something like this.
Might seem strange but if you written hundreds of thousands of things then you would realize it.
Thanks for the Renga!
Ricky
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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That is debatable there so many different forms now poetry.
Renga referring to a haiku.
I generally don't like short things like that because the way my mind works I cycle from above and it comes fast and it comes powerful and it comes in great stanzas.
I would actually have to turn off the plumbing from above to get to the point where my own mind would accept something like this.
Might seem strange but if you written hundreds of thousands of things then you would realize it.
Thanks for the Renga!
Ricky
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you Ricky for your review of this complete, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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I like your new profile picture very nice.
Ricky
Comment from aryr
An interesting concept, I love the idea of having a multitude of poets contributing. I think this was great and I do look forward to more. It is creative and unique and from the past. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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An interesting concept, I love the idea of having a multitude of poets contributing. I think this was great and I do look forward to more. It is creative and unique and from the past. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for you review, glad you liked this couplet, love Dolly x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written couplet and addition to the multi-author Renga book. We have the coldest two weeks in roundabout thirteen years. Several pipes burst because if frozen pipes this year.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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A very well-written couplet and addition to the multi-author Renga book. We have the coldest two weeks in roundabout thirteen years. Several pipes burst because if frozen pipes this year.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you Sandra for your review, glad you liked this couplet, sorry to hear about your pipes, love Dolly x
Comment from royowen
A wonderful addition to the renga challenge that Gypsy has set up, your contribution can always be participated as a really good, and it is, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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A wonderful addition to the renga challenge that Gypsy has set up, your contribution can always be participated as a really good, and it is, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review, glad you liked this couplet, love Dolly x
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Well done
Comment from zanya
The landscape blanketed under the grip of wintry conditions, coupled with a cessation of human activity, resulting in 'peaceful silence' well portrayed here in this 7/7 couplet
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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The landscape blanketed under the grip of wintry conditions, coupled with a cessation of human activity, resulting in 'peaceful silence' well portrayed here in this 7/7 couplet
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you Zanya for your review, glad you enjoyed this couplet, love Dolly x
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Dolly.
By the description your words meet the style requirements. The only problem is, I don't like seeing pictures of snow at the end of July. That stuff will be here soon enough. Ha
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello Dolly.
By the description your words meet the style requirements. The only problem is, I don't like seeing pictures of snow at the end of July. That stuff will be here soon enough. Ha
Robert
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you Robert for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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You're welcome
Comment from judiverse
To me, there's nothing calming about ice. I hate having to walk or drive on it. Your words are well chosen to have a soothing effect. A peaceful silence may come if people stay off the roads. Lovely artwork. that does look like a peaceful scene in the artwork. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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To me, there's nothing calming about ice. I hate having to walk or drive on it. Your words are well chosen to have a soothing effect. A peaceful silence may come if people stay off the roads. Lovely artwork. that does look like a peaceful scene in the artwork. judi
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you Judi for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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You're welcome. judi