Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from somedayOneday
Very well put and with a message to all...Lust is for the insensitive and uncaring person who only wants to get a quick fix of sorts....Love is for the long term minded people who want to give all they have to another person ...but in order to obtain Love in its true form you must have sincerity and believe in one another.
A really great write that means so much.
With regards
Dave
Very well put and with a message to all...Lust is for the insensitive and uncaring person who only wants to get a quick fix of sorts....Love is for the long term minded people who want to give all they have to another person ...but in order to obtain Love in its true form you must have sincerity and believe in one another.
A really great write that means so much.
With regards
Dave
Comment Written 14-Apr-2006
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
hi Inner Sanctum
Short but definately not so sweet.
Some say lust is the first 'bud' that may evolve into love. But as you say at the end of this piece
With slow betrayal
Until one day
A wake up call
of rejection
I guess it is inevitable that we all fall prey, eventually.
hope you are well my friend?
Best wishes Peter
hi Inner Sanctum
Short but definately not so sweet.
Some say lust is the first 'bud' that may evolve into love. But as you say at the end of this piece
With slow betrayal
Until one day
A wake up call
of rejection
I guess it is inevitable that we all fall prey, eventually.
hope you are well my friend?
Best wishes Peter
Comment Written 12-Apr-2006
Comment from LarkSong
Hi there...Wonderful, wonderful words with such deep meaning...The "wake up call" is so accurate...I really believe anything/everything that comes our way but we choose to ignore always comes back as a "wake up call" until we "get it"... Again, beautiful artwork...
Sincerely,
LarkSong
Hi there...Wonderful, wonderful words with such deep meaning...The "wake up call" is so accurate...I really believe anything/everything that comes our way but we choose to ignore always comes back as a "wake up call" until we "get it"... Again, beautiful artwork...
Sincerely,
LarkSong
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006
Comment from Margokatt
fabulous! I would have liked a subtle rhyme here. . .because it would have increased the flow. . .i actually felt like it did rhyme a little. . .but the blue mood and the words were poignant and perhaps a little warning to a dear friend??? :) MK
fabulous! I would have liked a subtle rhyme here. . .because it would have increased the flow. . .i actually felt like it did rhyme a little. . .but the blue mood and the words were poignant and perhaps a little warning to a dear friend??? :) MK
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006
Comment from Lizwriter
Cynical, but oh, so true. I had just such an experience. This poem flows well and makes sense, too. Great job.
Lizwriter
Cynical, but oh, so true. I had just such an experience. This poem flows well and makes sense, too. Great job.
Lizwriter
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006
Comment from ishta
I wasn't sure what was central, just to ponder. Is it the lust of the flesh? It seems to be a few states of being, but still needs, in my opinion, something we can hold on to, no pun intended : ) I still think it's publishable (not a word), just the way it is.
I wasn't sure what was central, just to ponder. Is it the lust of the flesh? It seems to be a few states of being, but still needs, in my opinion, something we can hold on to, no pun intended : ) I still think it's publishable (not a word), just the way it is.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006
Comment from Trish4ever
I found this poem to be short, sweet and true. Love doesn't come easy. Sometimes it doesn't come at all. Know that God will always love you and J.C as well. Take care and I really loved your poem. Sincerely, Trish4ever.
I found this poem to be short, sweet and true. Love doesn't come easy. Sometimes it doesn't come at all. Know that God will always love you and J.C as well. Take care and I really loved your poem. Sincerely, Trish4ever.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006
Comment from Kingsland
lust and love get confused by some
for one is true and the other will make you come undone
this was a very well written piece of poetry
that was my pleasure to read and review... John
lust and love get confused by some
for one is true and the other will make you come undone
this was a very well written piece of poetry
that was my pleasure to read and review... John
Comment Written 11-Apr-2006