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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(typo: peary gates s/b pearly) Startling imagery of the levels of heaven--love the colors and the rainbow finale. Good footnotes! Condolences on your son. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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(typo: peary gates s/b pearly) Startling imagery of the levels of heaven--love the colors and the rainbow finale. Good footnotes! Condolences on your son. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thanks Liz and I'll check into that one Grammar error.
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
Your poem in honor of your beloved son brought me to tears because I have a son as well. I cannot imagine the amount of pain you must go through on a daily basis.
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
May God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Your poem in honor of your beloved son brought me to tears because I have a son as well. I cannot imagine the amount of pain you must go through on a daily basis.
Thank you so much for sharing;-)
May God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Well the piece was meant to more or less bring presence of heaven into somebody's life. It doesn't realize it.
Thanks kindly Melodie for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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