Collection of Writer's Tips #1
Chapter One ~ The Eyes35 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
See ya next time. I've worked so many hours this week I'm catching up today. Who'd have thought there were so many descriptions for eyes, or for brows and looks? I'll have to remember them.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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See ya next time. I've worked so many hours this week I'm catching up today. Who'd have thought there were so many descriptions for eyes, or for brows and looks? I'll have to remember them.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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If you add this to your bookcase as many have, you won't need to remember them all. That way, they will be at your fingertips. Thank you for the wonderful review, dear.
Sal XOs...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh those adjectives and their placement just make all the difference in the world, don't they? Amazing how you can take something simple and make it so very intense... love it!! ;) Thanx for the tips, Lady Sal! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Oh those adjectives and their placement just make all the difference in the world, don't they? Amazing how you can take something simple and make it so very intense... love it!! ;) Thanx for the tips, Lady Sal! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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I'm glad you enjoyed this first installment. I'm finishing up the second chapter this week. Thank you for the wonderful review and encouragement!
Sal XOs.....
Comment from LJbutterfly
I am new to FanStory, with only two posts so far. This is a fabulous writing tool that I never expected to find here. I have written several short stories that are not posted, and will now go back to see if I can enhance my descriptions. I sincerely thank you for sharing your expertise. I am looking forward to future chapters. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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I am new to FanStory, with only two posts so far. This is a fabulous writing tool that I never expected to find here. I have written several short stories that are not posted, and will now go back to see if I can enhance my descriptions. I sincerely thank you for sharing your expertise. I am looking forward to future chapters. Thanks again.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Hello Lorraine, and we,come to FanStory! Thank you for the wonderful review and kind compliments. More than anything, I'm so glad that my post was helpful to your writing.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Sally, that is really good. I could see many that I would benefit my work, and I'm sure even the most well-known authors wouldn't mind a look at this. It's a great idea. Thanks for putting it on FS, I'll print it out :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Hi Sally, that is really good. I could see many that I would benefit my work, and I'm sure even the most well-known authors wouldn't mind a look at this. It's a great idea. Thanks for putting it on FS, I'll print it out :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. I'm delighted if it serves as a handy tool.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Mr. Green
Sally, you are an inspiration to all of us. I wish I had found this earlier, there are so many wonderful tips and ideas that you offer. And the "In a sentence" at the end of each list is a wonderful way of bringing it all together. I have never found this kind of straight forward advise before, nor have I seen so many ways of describing a single facial attribute. Thank you so much for sharing. You have so much talent, we are all blessed by knowing you. Mr. Green
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Sally, you are an inspiration to all of us. I wish I had found this earlier, there are so many wonderful tips and ideas that you offer. And the "In a sentence" at the end of each list is a wonderful way of bringing it all together. I have never found this kind of straight forward advise before, nor have I seen so many ways of describing a single facial attribute. Thank you so much for sharing. You have so much talent, we are all blessed by knowing you. Mr. Green
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars! I'm delighted that you enjoyed this and found it to be helpful.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for your writing endeavors,
Sally :))
Comment from Janetsue
What a marvelous and helpful series you have started, Sally. Wish I had a six for this. It is very descriptive and offers a banquet of food for thought. You possess all the attributes of an excellent mentor for the benefit of those having a desire to become a new or better writer. I am eager to read more. Blessings and joy, my friend!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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What a marvelous and helpful series you have started, Sally. Wish I had a six for this. It is very descriptive and offers a banquet of food for thought. You possess all the attributes of an excellent mentor for the benefit of those having a desire to become a new or better writer. I am eager to read more. Blessings and joy, my friend!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind compliments. I created this to be a helpful tool. I'm working on the second chapter hopefully soon. My intent is to encourage and bring out the best in others. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....xo....
Comment from Jay Squires
My, you spent a lot of time on compiling that list, Sally. It should serve the writer well. I know I've found "The Emotion Thesaurus," by Angela Ackerman, and Becca Puglisi, useful when I'm trying to describe a particular emotion. The fact that I downloaded it on Kindle makes it easy to reference the thesaurus while I have either Word or FanStory opened up. I'll be interested in reading more of your posts, Sally. Several years ago, I wrote a series here called, "How This Critter Crits." It got quite a few views. I think yours should do so as well.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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My, you spent a lot of time on compiling that list, Sally. It should serve the writer well. I know I've found "The Emotion Thesaurus," by Angela Ackerman, and Becca Puglisi, useful when I'm trying to describe a particular emotion. The fact that I downloaded it on Kindle makes it easy to reference the thesaurus while I have either Word or FanStory opened up. I'll be interested in reading more of your posts, Sally. Several years ago, I wrote a series here called, "How This Critter Crits." It got quite a few views. I think yours should do so as well.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Dear Jay, thank you so much for the kind review and comments. So good to see you today. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my writer's tips. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for your writing endeavors,
Sally XOs...
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an excellent and most useful post. I am looking forward to more of your Writer's Tips. You are a skilled writer to this series will be much treasured!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent and most useful post. I am looking forward to more of your Writer's Tips. You are a skilled writer to this series will be much treasured!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Rebecca. I'm delighted this helps you and encourages your writing. I'm working on the second chapter now that I have finished my novella. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
You never realize how many different descriptions you can use until you read a post like this. Suddenly, you see things so differently. I'm sure this post has helped many, or will help many, in their future writings.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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You never realize how many different descriptions you can use until you read a post like this. Suddenly, you see things so differently. I'm sure this post has helped many, or will help many, in their future writings.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Ah, thank you, dear Meghan. So good to see you. I'm glad you are helped by this. TO jear that it has helped so many already, is a blessing to me. Sending you my best today as,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Sugarray77
WOW Sally. I am really impressed with your wonderful write and will bookmark it for further study. I really want to look at the way you have presented these descriptive pieces and how you used them. Thank you!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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WOW Sally. I am really impressed with your wonderful write and will bookmark it for further study. I really want to look at the way you have presented these descriptive pieces and how you used them. Thank you!!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Melissa. I am honored. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....