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Wonder Why

a 2-10-2 poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a great poem entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt. This is an entertaining poem of truth and should do well in the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Rebecca
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the presentation. I think it's funny.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from Spitfire
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Every word but one begins with the W sound. I didn't get why the different spelling in the third line? Somehow Elmer Fudd got in there (not awound.)

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    I originally had the word WASN?T in the second line, but found it was considered a one- syllable word. The quick fix was to remove the contraction. Don?t you agwee?
reply by Spitfire on 24-Jun-2020
    lol
Comment from Earl Corp
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I'm not sure, but I think you only have nine syllables in the second line, you might want to check that before thew reviewing committee does. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Right you are, Earl. Fixed it. Thanks.
Comment from Janilou
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When Wayne

wasn't awound, well, Wayne's wife went A-WOL;

Wruh wroh!


Wruh wroh is wight! I guess I'd have to know more about the situation before I could pass judgement on Wayne's wife. LOL But still, I do wonder if Wayne doesn't deserve better than a cheating wife!
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Wayne was no winner.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written 2-10-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very cute words that made me giggle. The last two words made me think of a big Scooby Doo dog saying it! lol Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Teri.
reply by Teri7 on 23-Jun-2020
    you are so welcome! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment from rspoet
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I'm sure Wilma was worried about Wayne
but maybe it was Wayne's warts that caused her to climb a wall.
Wonderful use of the double U.
Well done.
Good luck in the 2-10-2 contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you. Robert
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well, certainly an alliteration celebration of the letter 'W'! ;) :) Your syllable count is correct according to the contest. Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020

reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
    Thank you, Y. M.