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Comment from F. William Lester
Much to my chagrin, I am guilty. I understand the distraction but, fortunately, have never been involved in an accident. I laughed with my face buried in my hands and shaking my head. Very good!
One small point, in the sentence with Mr. Manna, "effect" should be "effected."
Thanks for the read. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Much to my chagrin, I am guilty. I understand the distraction but, fortunately, have never been involved in an accident. I laughed with my face buried in my hands and shaking my head. Very good!
One small point, in the sentence with Mr. Manna, "effect" should be "effected."
Thanks for the read. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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I am so glad you like it. I am working on more. Thank you for catching the error.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is too funny. A big catastrophe over such a little thing. Your comments were priceless, I laughed all the way through. Thanks for the bit of humor this morning. Keep up the great stories.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This is too funny. A big catastrophe over such a little thing. Your comments were priceless, I laughed all the way through. Thanks for the bit of humor this morning. Keep up the great stories.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the stars. Sometimes I write down the comments my family makes. Especial my son-in-law, he can really sting some funny lines together.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You have found your niche in life--a humor flash fiction reporter! Start collecting these for a book. We all need laughter in our lives. It will be a best seller.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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You have found your niche in life--a humor flash fiction reporter! Start collecting these for a book. We all need laughter in our lives. It will be a best seller.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the stars. I don't know why I wrote the first one I did, but I liked it and thought I work on some more. I do hope the book idea works cause I am gonna do it.
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I think it will work. Keep working on episodes.
Comment from Diana Kane
This was fabulous. And I chuckled several times. It is so outrageous and yet in someways quite possible. Just wonderful read for me. Thank you For sharing this.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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This was fabulous. And I chuckled several times. It is so outrageous and yet in someways quite possible. Just wonderful read for me. Thank you For sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you. I am so glad you liked it. I also see that you have become a fan. I hope you find my other works entertaining.
Comment from January L'Angelle
Hahahaha!!!! I'm still laughing! This is hilarious. "Check out the shitter on that critter" OMG! That's the funniest line ever. This account of what happened is a great way to write a story. I love that idea. Great Flash Fiction. One note, I think there's a typo and some changes that need work: "Silvestro Manna, Clinical Nurse Specialist, 25, a driver effect by the accident," I think it should be: "Silvestro Manna, Clinical Specialist, 25, one of the drivers affected by the accident,..." That section just needed some work. Otherwise this is awesome!!! I loved it. -January L.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Hahahaha!!!! I'm still laughing! This is hilarious. "Check out the shitter on that critter" OMG! That's the funniest line ever. This account of what happened is a great way to write a story. I love that idea. Great Flash Fiction. One note, I think there's a typo and some changes that need work: "Silvestro Manna, Clinical Nurse Specialist, 25, a driver effect by the accident," I think it should be: "Silvestro Manna, Clinical Specialist, 25, one of the drivers affected by the accident,..." That section just needed some work. Otherwise this is awesome!!! I loved it. -January L.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you. I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This short piece, Mini-skirt Causes Multi-car Pile, is likely based on a true event, but your quotes from those involved are more hilarious, I'm sure. than reality would recall. Nice job with this.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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This short piece, Mini-skirt Causes Multi-car Pile, is likely based on a true event, but your quotes from those involved are more hilarious, I'm sure. than reality would recall. Nice job with this.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
So truly observed, explored, expressed and conveyed the theme with a message, fairly and modestly worded, the title is significant and thematic manifestation is well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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So truly observed, explored, expressed and conveyed the theme with a message, fairly and modestly worded, the title is significant and thematic manifestation is well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you
