Traffic
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Light"With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
15 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Liz,
I love your style of writing... suspenseful, descriptive, entertaining... and further down the page, at the 'dumpster diving', funny... couldn't help but laugh. Thanks for that!
I'll try to read this story chapter-by-chapter when the time is available. I really enjoyed the read and the storyline.
I'll love to have this, Doman-Delacato education, sounds just what the doctor ordered. Okay, I'll give the creeping and crawling a go! Okay crawl first, got it!
their minds was, How *how* much risk would they be taking to look in the window...
With our thoughts we create...
adventurous curiosities.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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Hi Liz,
I love your style of writing... suspenseful, descriptive, entertaining... and further down the page, at the 'dumpster diving', funny... couldn't help but laugh. Thanks for that!
I'll try to read this story chapter-by-chapter when the time is available. I really enjoyed the read and the storyline.
I'll love to have this, Doman-Delacato education, sounds just what the doctor ordered. Okay, I'll give the creeping and crawling a go! Okay crawl first, got it!
their minds was, How *how* much risk would they be taking to look in the window...
With our thoughts we create...
adventurous curiosities.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2023
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This is a delightful review. Thank you. Half of this (Part 1) is on Amazon if you want it on Kindle, $1.99 Or just keep reading here with no need for a review. Just enjoy.
Comment from rockinm76233
Enjoyed your story here and must add I visited the Sisters of St. Joseph page and enjoyed that as well. It is obvious you are an accomplished writer, researcher etc. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Enjoyed your story here and must add I visited the Sisters of St. Joseph page and enjoyed that as well. It is obvious you are an accomplished writer, researcher etc. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Liz O'Neill I just read the first chapter of your book, Traffic about two women that got stranded while taking a walk; looks like it is while worth reading the next chapter.
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello Liz O'Neill I just read the first chapter of your book, Traffic about two women that got stranded while taking a walk; looks like it is while worth reading the next chapter.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I'm pleased it has caught your interest. It isn't necessary to write reviews. Just enjoy it. There is barely a calm moment in the whole story. There is some lovely Native American ceremonies woven through it. Also some heartbreaking stories from the girls rescued. Thank you for this supportive review.
Comment from aryr
An amazing opening chapter, Liz. It totally provided insight as to where the pair were coming from. I am afraid, I am clueless when it comes to cars and the effects dense fog can have on them, but I am glad you knew, even if you had to research it. After I send this, I am going to become a fan so I can read more of your work, if you don't mind. Great job.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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An amazing opening chapter, Liz. It totally provided insight as to where the pair were coming from. I am afraid, I am clueless when it comes to cars and the effects dense fog can have on them, but I am glad you knew, even if you had to research it. After I send this, I am going to become a fan so I can read more of your work, if you don't mind. Great job.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Sweet...I am honored. Thank you. My stuff is always unique. I don't think you will be disappointed. You could just read it without reviewing. I wrote two autobiographical allegories in the Winnie the Pooh genre. Just read them & don't worry about reviews...just enjoy Bea the Wee Bear. It's called Be Wee With Bea.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yes! Calgon, take me away!! :) :) Oh, my goodness, Liz, what an intriguing tale for the present times, my lady! :) Was just glad to see the 'fiction' tag on this one - lol1 ;) I'm thinking Liz and Linda are in for quite the time all because of a broken-down car! ;) Look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Yes! Calgon, take me away!! :) :) Oh, my goodness, Liz, what an intriguing tale for the present times, my lady! :) Was just glad to see the 'fiction' tag on this one - lol1 ;) I'm thinking Liz and Linda are in for quite the time all because of a broken-down car! ;) Look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you for a very entertaining review. I will give you a **spoiler** there is barely a calm moment in this whole story.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Oh, Liz, I am shivering with anticipation. This is a good, captivating story. Starting with the mist and hazy road that seemed endless. Then the beckoning tiny light when they were in need to find a place to sleep. And finally, the adventure, with guards, rifles, and the discovery of a detector, making it difficult for them to approach the window to peep and satisfy their curiosity about what crime was committed there.
I want to know more!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Oh, Liz, I am shivering with anticipation. This is a good, captivating story. Starting with the mist and hazy road that seemed endless. Then the beckoning tiny light when they were in need to find a place to sleep. And finally, the adventure, with guards, rifles, and the discovery of a detector, making it difficult for them to approach the window to peep and satisfy their curiosity about what crime was committed there.
I want to know more!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you for a very entertaining review. I will give you a **spoiler** there is barely a calm moment in this whole story.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This story is highly interesting and I would like to read more. The characters are believable and the conversations are free flowing and natural. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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This story is highly interesting and I would like to read more. The characters are believable and the conversations are free flowing and natural. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you for a very entertaining review. I will give you a **spoiler** there is barely a calm moment in this whole story.
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That's what draws me! Love it.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I'm intrigued already. I like the story. It's filled with excitement and mystery. I'm wondering what the women will find and will it be dangerous to them. It seems so. The writing is very good and I like that it's near a Native American Reservation. That must turn into something interesting! I look forward to reading more about these two women. (Liz and Linda) Well done. -January L.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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I'm intrigued already. I like the story. It's filled with excitement and mystery. I'm wondering what the women will find and will it be dangerous to them. It seems so. The writing is very good and I like that it's near a Native American Reservation. That must turn into something interesting! I look forward to reading more about these two women. (Liz and Linda) Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Why thank you. I am honored with your enthusiastic review. I will give you a **spoiler** there is barely a calm moment.
Comment from Mary Furlong
I enjoyed reading this so much that I just had to give it five stars. It is very entertaining even though a bit confusing. I think you may have overplayed your hand with all the clever comparisons. As an example, I got a big kick out of Doman-Delacato, but the idea that anyone would dwell on a remedial reading program at such a time defies credulity. And did they both think of ducks in a shooting gallery at the same time? I could go on, but I am sure you get the point. A fun read anyway.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed reading this so much that I just had to give it five stars. It is very entertaining even though a bit confusing. I think you may have overplayed your hand with all the clever comparisons. As an example, I got a big kick out of Doman-Delacato, but the idea that anyone would dwell on a remedial reading program at such a time defies credulity. And did they both think of ducks in a shooting gallery at the same time? I could go on, but I am sure you get the point. A fun read anyway.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad youenjoyed it.
Comment from lancellot
No, it was what the slight of build woman had in her hand as she came through the doorway and which was now leaning against the knicked-up faded Shaker shingle clapboards.
- You should look at this sentence again. Something isn't right about it.
There also is much telling in this chapter. Or maybe this is just a part of chapter 1?
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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No, it was what the slight of build woman had in her hand as she came through the doorway and which was now leaning against the knicked-up faded Shaker shingle clapboards.
- You should look at this sentence again. Something isn't right about it.
There also is much telling in this chapter. Or maybe this is just a part of chapter 1?
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you for your involved review.